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breath across her lips
I had only focused on worshiping her clit for 30 minutes
And she fell back into another world
I leaned my head to the side on her creamy thigh
Her lips vibrated and whispered in high tonal moans
Her legs quivered fierce and jerked for several minutes
My breath across her blood swollen member
Throbbing with tension...her lips at attention
Begging to be sucked again
I attended to the lovely rows of delicious womanly nerves
The purest sight...the holiest of holies
She breathed deep and hard 5 or 6 times
I must have triggered more to cum through the veil
I gently pinched with both thumb and index her pussy whole
The swollen now hard...shaking as I swabbed my lips and tongue
Back and forth sideways across the temple doors...tickling her bottom
A jerk of her pelvic she squirts into the air
And I catch the rest as it flows from her erect clitoris
She falls spent... back with a yell...she collapses and recovers
For a few... as I lick the remaining juice from her spot
She dresses and kisses me bye
Heading back after her lunch break stress therapy session
I love my noontime job...
And she fell back into another world
I leaned my head to the side on her creamy thigh
Her lips vibrated and whispered in high tonal moans
Her legs quivered fierce and jerked for several minutes
My breath across her blood swollen member
Throbbing with tension...her lips at attention
Begging to be sucked again
I attended to the lovely rows of delicious womanly nerves
The purest sight...the holiest of holies
She breathed deep and hard 5 or 6 times
I must have triggered more to cum through the veil
I gently pinched with both thumb and index her pussy whole
The swollen now hard...shaking as I swabbed my lips and tongue
Back and forth sideways across the temple doors...tickling her bottom
A jerk of her pelvic she squirts into the air
And I catch the rest as it flows from her erect clitoris
She falls spent... back with a yell...she collapses and recovers
For a few... as I lick the remaining juice from her spot
She dresses and kisses me bye
Heading back after her lunch break stress therapy session
I love my noontime job...
Written by
runaway-mindtrain
Published 3rd Nov 2017
| Edited 29th Dec 2017
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Re. breath across her lips
3rd Nov 2017 6:41am
"shaking as I swabbed back and forth
Sideways across the temple doors."
damn it that's how it's done ;)
titillating visuals bringing me to the brink
then pushing me over into waves of ecstasy..
sigh so sexy..
~Raven
Sideways across the temple doors."
damn it that's how it's done ;)
titillating visuals bringing me to the brink
then pushing me over into waves of ecstasy..
sigh so sexy..
~Raven
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Re: Re. breath across her lips
3rd Nov 2017 6:46am
I have never published such before...was apprehensive....thanks ..your comments makes me feel it was worth it.....thanks for the support...much love-J
Re. breath across her lips
Anonymous
3rd Nov 2017 3:41pm
I cant breathe.. ...
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Re: Re. breath across her lips
3rd Nov 2017 4:39pm
Re. breath across her lips
3rd Nov 2017 4:13pm
A surprise! Your first erotica is so powerful and special. You are going to make all the ladies blush lol.....I have read it many times.....Love it .....
RoseJasmine
RoseJasmine
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Re: Re. breath across her lips
3rd Nov 2017 4:40pm
Re. breath across her lips
3rd Nov 2017 6:01pm
First erotica, i find that hard to believe...lol
every woman should be lucky to spend their lunch hour with you.
every woman should be lucky to spend their lunch hour with you.
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Re: Re. breath across her lips
First time writing it down..but yes this happens in action...so your kinda right... thanks for the read-Jeff
Re. breath across her lips
3rd Nov 2017 9:41pm
Ooh..
OOhh!
Amazing.
lol
a poem about eating a woman's lovely possession....is always welcomed..!
A quick yet satisfying break it must've been indeed...
Hot!
-H-
OOhh!
Amazing.
lol
a poem about eating a woman's lovely possession....is always welcomed..!
A quick yet satisfying break it must've been indeed...
Hot!
-H-
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Re: Re. breath across her lips
4th Nov 2017 00:15am
Re. breath across her lips
Wow bro. Gotta admit, it had me the moment I saw the pic...mmmmm yummy lol but your verse...wwwwooowww...you sounded like you had a feast, n damn I sure wish I had a feast like that myself lol
Exceptional spilling lol
Exceptional spilling lol
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Re: Re. breath across her lips
4th Nov 2017 9:29pm
Re. breath across her lips
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Nov 2017 11:04pm
6th Nov 2017 5:58pm
Well Heaven's to bitsy! Breaking this down into itsy bitsy detail and I loved every word which has me shaded in tones of green! Good for the both of y'all! Well done (in many regards) my friend!
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
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Re: Re. breath across her lips
Lovely Taryn...I was inspired by previous writings from you, Crimsin and other sensual poets here...I am still learning how to write such..I look forward to more lessons from the in depth sexiness that is inherent with many story tellers here...thank you bunches
-much love Jeff
-much love Jeff
Re. breath across her lips
13th Nov 2017 10:18pm
Can't believe this one slipped in while I was locked in seclusion ... hot hot write my sweet. Sounds like you know how to worship a lady ...
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Re: Re. breath across her lips
13th Nov 2017 10:24pm
yes intense worship of a woman's body....I didn't know there was another way to do it?...
-thanks for the constant support
-much love -Jeff
-thanks for the constant support
-much love -Jeff
Re. breath across her lips
24th Nov 2017 8:08am
dearest Jeff I love a man
who knows how to worship
at a woman's clit..
this is red hot erotica
i'm creaming from these lines..
"I attended to the lovely rows of delicious womanly nerves
The purest sight...the holiest of holies"
damn it man you know what you're doing..
love Crim
who knows how to worship
at a woman's clit..
this is red hot erotica
i'm creaming from these lines..
"I attended to the lovely rows of delicious womanly nerves
The purest sight...the holiest of holies"
damn it man you know what you're doing..
love Crim
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Re: Re. breath across her lips
24th Nov 2017 8:16am
Re. breath across her lips
26th Nov 2017 2:15am
worshiping her clit for 30 minutes
your crush o lover poet ...will many crush ..seeing her picture only.. see on DUP it's erotica mostly ...my first has over 1200 reads I think... go check it if you please... throw some of your ink
other gals would love to sweep poet ur erotica is sensually lovely... lunch break must have been the loveliest
sexually...you must have cum quickly she orgasmed a million times... that's agains imagerical surmise
your crush o lover poet ...will many crush ..seeing her picture only.. see on DUP it's erotica mostly ...my first has over 1200 reads I think... go check it if you please... throw some of your ink
other gals would love to sweep poet ur erotica is sensually lovely... lunch break must have been the loveliest
sexually...you must have cum quickly she orgasmed a million times... that's agains imagerical surmise
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Re. breath across her lips
26th Dec 2017 10:29pm
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26th Dec 2017 11:44pm