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March 30th
This painting is an amazing accident all the colours are running
madcap after each other, indigo fights with rose permanent
opposition then kissing and deep connection.
Cadmium yellow ever playful c sharp sap green the sweetest little sister
buzzing around all this my newly born friend
a blue bottle we love without words,
into miles and miles of blue out past the green trees
trusting in the sunshine and breathing out on this spring day
the moment to be and if you dare to take it what a beauty !
madcap after each other, indigo fights with rose permanent
opposition then kissing and deep connection.
Cadmium yellow ever playful c sharp sap green the sweetest little sister
buzzing around all this my newly born friend
a blue bottle we love without words,
into miles and miles of blue out past the green trees
trusting in the sunshine and breathing out on this spring day
the moment to be and if you dare to take it what a beauty !
Published 31st Oct 2017
| Edited 1st Nov 2017
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18th Nov 2017 7:29pm
It's like Bob Ross just punched me in the face, yet it's still uniquely you.
i love it.
colors fighting with each other,accidents, kissing,i feel like breathing in sunshine like its a drug.
well penned Phoebe
i love it.
colors fighting with each other,accidents, kissing,i feel like breathing in sunshine like its a drug.
well penned Phoebe
24th Sep 2019 9:29pm
The sense of life permeating the piece through it's details, the action imbued into the colors, it's imagery and the way it all runs together, one rapid fire image after the next, is really unique, interesting and refreshing. It is art without that stale sense of artifice. It is a terrific write, really unique.
Hello, I'm Daniel. :) If you'd be interested in reading this in an audio poem for the site podcast, The Poetcast Project, please send to:
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If you would be interested in some helpful tips about technique and construction, please join us in the group Cafe Critique. It is a very positive group with great feedback.
Hello, I'm Daniel. :) If you'd be interested in reading this in an audio poem for the site podcast, The Poetcast Project, please send to:
undergroundoutloud@outlook.com
If you would be interested in some helpful tips about technique and construction, please join us in the group Cafe Critique. It is a very positive group with great feedback.
24th Sep 2019 9:34pm
Hi Daniel !
Thank you for that comment ! I am very interested in reading it for a Poetcast. I will check out the Cafe Critique too....
How did you find my poem ? There are so many up here on this site ?
Will email now :-)
All the best
Phoebe
Thank you for that comment ! I am very interested in reading it for a Poetcast. I will check out the Cafe Critique too....
How did you find my poem ? There are so many up here on this site ?
Will email now :-)
All the best
Phoebe
24th Sep 2019 10:00pm
It's good to meet you Phoebe and I love that name. When I was about 12, my friends and I played an amazing video game called Paladin's Quest. That was one of the characters, whom I called Fobe. Said like robe, you know, and my friends gave me such a hard time for that mispronunciation. lol
Well I saw you in the rogues gallery over there and decided to just come check out your poetry. I look around a lil bit each time I sign in, mostly for people not getting much love on their writing. I try to give people what I would want, on my poetry.
Thank you so much! Being featured on the podcast will hopefully draw you new readers. <3
Well I saw you in the rogues gallery over there and decided to just come check out your poetry. I look around a lil bit each time I sign in, mostly for people not getting much love on their writing. I try to give people what I would want, on my poetry.
Thank you so much! Being featured on the podcast will hopefully draw you new readers. <3
25th Sep 2019 7:52am
Fobe ! thats great ! also "people not getting much love on their poetry" there is something priceless in that, you are a bodhisattva troll, type ?
THANK YOU Daniel, I like the idea of getting more readers :-)
THANK YOU Daniel, I like the idea of getting more readers :-)
25th Sep 2019 1:24pm
