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F**K YOU, SEA MONKEYS, (haiku)
A simple clip cut
promised alien beings
in the mail Tuesday
Naked family
smiling together in joy
with an eager boy
New friends in the mail
Dehydrated brine shrimp eggs
with a life packet.....
Nothing against you...,
what I expected from you
never quite came true
promised alien beings
in the mail Tuesday
Naked family
smiling together in joy
with an eager boy
New friends in the mail
Dehydrated brine shrimp eggs
with a life packet.....
Nothing against you...,
what I expected from you
never quite came true
Published 30th Oct 2017
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30th Oct 2017 7:16pm
31st Oct 2017 00:10am
I expected the little creatures depicted on the package.....badass mothafucka's
1st Nov 2017 1:20am
this is so clever - damn I remember sea monkeys - my only friends :-)
I enjoyed this a lot :-)
I enjoyed this a lot :-)
5th Nov 2017 4:23pm
