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With eyes drawn...
With eyes still drawn and soft ball grip,
inbetween my thighs, i
secure the tip.
Stiff
teasing, eas-
ing...
POP!
The seal is broken,
Masturbation by inhalation.
My nostrils bow down,
time,
for Eden's grind
slowly,
firmly,
cranking the handle,
around, around, and around...
three-hundred and 69 degrees.
No instant gratification for these buckling seeds.
Essence dominates time,
The fire burns, the water seethes, the whistle trills.
This morning i thirst for black,
full of vigor, and...
a froth
finish.
inbetween my thighs, i
secure the tip.
Stiff
teasing, eas-
ing...
POP!
The seal is broken,
Masturbation by inhalation.
My nostrils bow down,
time,
for Eden's grind
slowly,
firmly,
cranking the handle,
around, around, and around...
three-hundred and 69 degrees.
No instant gratification for these buckling seeds.
Essence dominates time,
The fire burns, the water seethes, the whistle trills.
This morning i thirst for black,
full of vigor, and...
a froth
finish.
Published 27th Oct 2017
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27th Oct 2017 7:55am
"The fire burns, the water seethes, the whistle trills.
This morning i thirst for black,
full of vigor, and...
a froth
finish. "
the extremes of natural forces are a great way to start the day....-J
This morning i thirst for black,
full of vigor, and...
a froth
finish. "
the extremes of natural forces are a great way to start the day....-J
27th Oct 2017 9:03am
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27th Oct 2017 3:02pm
Thank you LilDragonFly
I look forward to reading many fine poems, and interacting with the poets on here.
💋😻
I look forward to reading many fine poems, and interacting with the poets on here.
💋😻
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27th Oct 2017 4:12pm
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28th Oct 2017 00:32am
27th Oct 2017 11:38pm
Nicely put together
"around, around and around
three hundred and 69 degrees"
Several degrees under the temperature of this write.
"around, around and around
three hundred and 69 degrees"
Several degrees under the temperature of this write.
28th Oct 2017 00:35am
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28th Oct 2017 1:17am
"Masturbation by inhalation" awesome line. I enjoyed this one as the title says it definitely had my eyes drawn in.
28th Oct 2017 5:52am
Anonymous
28th Oct 2017 1:25am
The images conjured here are just too delectable...so many lines I could highlight but no need, those above me I’d only be echoing...
Xoxo Taryn
Xoxo Taryn
28th Oct 2017 5:53am
28th Oct 2017 3:24am
a beautifully crafted spilled ink spilled with real skill and passion - it feels dreamy and left my grey matter sparking
inspirational stuff :-)
inspirational stuff :-)
28th Oct 2017 5:54am
28th Oct 2017 6:41am
Welcome to Dup
I good write to start off with
Certainly not picked up off the usual word play shelf
I good write to start off with
Certainly not picked up off the usual word play shelf
28th Oct 2017 6:50am
30th Oct 2017 1:56am
powerfully erotic penned so effortlessly (or at least you leave the readers feeling that way. Hedonism at it's finest : )
30th Oct 2017 3:37am
Hedonistic by choice. Lol
Effortless hardly, write by rewrite , bt rewrite
Thank u
Effortless hardly, write by rewrite , bt rewrite
Thank u
1st Nov 2017 4:05pm
You have a special talent for erotic writing.
I like that you dont have to use words like Pussy or Cock....
and still are able to express your sexuality.
I like that you dont have to use words like Pussy or Cock....
and still are able to express your sexuality.
1st Nov 2017 6:47pm
Thank you Saximony, I appreciate the comment.
I try not to use pussy and cock too much. Sometimes i cannot avoid it. Lol
I try not to use pussy and cock too much. Sometimes i cannot avoid it. Lol
