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Lying in Bed with You as the Radiator Clanks
Autumn cool early AM
Window open
Heat rising through these old radiators
Been clanking for years and years
A symphony of sorts though ambient comes to mind
We've been together many of those years
Intimacy is the bond of a working relationship
It never has to be questioned
Heat rising
Mine too
Window open
Heat rising through these old radiators
Been clanking for years and years
A symphony of sorts though ambient comes to mind
We've been together many of those years
Intimacy is the bond of a working relationship
It never has to be questioned
Heat rising
Mine too
Published 26th Oct 2017
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26th Oct 2017 1:43pm
Wow ... this one has it all ... beautiful yet simple imagery ... crisp line breaks ... and a great closing. A keeper!
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Anonymous
26th Oct 2017 2:54pm
There is so much I love about autumn. This is a great short write. That ending...perfect
26th Oct 2017 3:48pm
26th Oct 2017 5:04pm
26th Oct 2017 6:26pm
nothing better than lying in bed
with your beloved
listening to familiar sounds..
soaking in the loving vibe
of this beautiful write..
~Raven
with your beloved
listening to familiar sounds..
soaking in the loving vibe
of this beautiful write..
~Raven
26th Oct 2017 6:30pm
28th Oct 2017 2:08am
I hate to intrude but I can actually see this scene :-) thanks to your really creative descriptions :-)
Massive Like :-)
Massive Like :-)
28th Oct 2017 3:28am
29th Oct 2017 3:40pm
Until now I never thought the word "Clank" could be used romantically... you changed that with this poem :)
29th Oct 2017 3:59pm
Yeah, clank is not round and sexy
But here at tge compound, it has special meaning
Thx !
But here at tge compound, it has special meaning
Thx !
