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Being Dead Has Its Benefits 7.0
(i)
Being Dead has
It’s benefits:
You never ever
Have to speak
To a call center
In Pakistan
About something
That you and they
Know nothing about
(ii)
Being Dead has
It’s benefits:
The dead never
Have to go to
The toilet and
Never suffer
From itchy bum
syndrome
(iii)
Being Dead has
It’s benefits:
You no longer
Have to worry
About Heaven,
Hell or the
Afterlife
(iv)
Being Dead has
It’s benefits:
For the first
Time you don’t
Have to pay
Any bills
Or tip annoying
Waiters
(v)
Being Dead has
It’s benefits:
You never have to
Pick up dog shit
And wipe your
Dogs ass after
It takes a dump
(vi)
Being Dead has
It’s benefits:
You can fart
In an elevator
And there is no
Way anyone is
Gonna know
It was you
(vii)
Being Dead has
It’s benefits:
I no longer
Have to pretend
To like you or
be your friend
Being Dead has
It’s benefits:
You never ever
Have to speak
To a call center
In Pakistan
About something
That you and they
Know nothing about
(ii)
Being Dead has
It’s benefits:
The dead never
Have to go to
The toilet and
Never suffer
From itchy bum
syndrome
(iii)
Being Dead has
It’s benefits:
You no longer
Have to worry
About Heaven,
Hell or the
Afterlife
(iv)
Being Dead has
It’s benefits:
For the first
Time you don’t
Have to pay
Any bills
Or tip annoying
Waiters
(v)
Being Dead has
It’s benefits:
You never have to
Pick up dog shit
And wipe your
Dogs ass after
It takes a dump
(vi)
Being Dead has
It’s benefits:
You can fart
In an elevator
And there is no
Way anyone is
Gonna know
It was you
(vii)
Being Dead has
It’s benefits:
I no longer
Have to pretend
To like you or
be your friend
Written by
David_Macleod
(14397816)
Published 25th Oct 2017
| Edited 26th Oct 2017
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Re. Being Dead Has Its Benefits 7.0
25th Oct 2017 11:14pm
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25th Oct 2017 11:23pm
Re. Being Dead Has Its Benefits 7.0
25th Oct 2017 11:29pm
LOL @ both the poem and Paul.
David, I found this both astute and sad at the same time.
David, I found this both astute and sad at the same time.
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1st Nov 2017 3:57am
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25th Oct 2017 11:39pm
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1st Nov 2017 3:58am
Re. Being Dead Has Its Benefits 7.0
Anonymous
26th Oct 2017 00:02am
This one gave me good giggle but I also got a feeling of a sad undertone at the same time. Great write as always :)
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1st Nov 2017 3:59am
thank you Sophie I am stoked that you enjoyed them but also got the undertow :-)))))
Re. Being Dead Has Its Benefits 7.0
Anonymous
26th Oct 2017 00:02am
Oh man, you're killing me with these! I suspect this list could grow exponentially if you put your brilliant mind to it! Huge hugs! ☺
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1st Nov 2017 4:00am
Re. Being Dead Has Its Benefits 7.0
26th Oct 2017 00:30am
"Being Dead has
It’s benefits:
You can fart
In an elevator
And there is no
Way anyone is
Gonna know
It was you"
rofl dearest David this is too freaking funny
though being alive has it's benefits too
I look forward to everyday hearing from you :)
love Brenda
It’s benefits:
You can fart
In an elevator
And there is no
Way anyone is
Gonna know
It was you"
rofl dearest David this is too freaking funny
though being alive has it's benefits too
I look forward to everyday hearing from you :)
love Brenda
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Re: Re. Being Dead Has Its Benefits 7.0
1st Nov 2017 4:01am
I am always glad if I can make you giggle - thank you :-))
The hugest of hugs :-))))))))
The hugest of hugs :-))))))))
Re. Being Dead Has Its Benefits 7.0
26th Oct 2017 1:03am
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1st Nov 2017 4:02am
Re. Being Dead Has Its Benefits 7.0
26th Oct 2017 2:49am
Oh my goodness ... This is fantastically humorous with sad truth interwoven ... Excellent as always David !
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1st Nov 2017 4:02am
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Anonymous
26th Oct 2017 7:40am
Loved your humorous dialog freeing ourselves from life's irritations.
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1st Nov 2017 4:03am