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brise délicate
you need me
to caress your ego
even now
when i feel broken
with nothing but shards
left in my tiny hands
i offer these little pieces
of my shattered soul
& with them make a mosaic
one of pain, lust & desire
to appease the god of masculinity
who causes me to bow
naked
on my knees
shaking like a little girl
hoping to garner your approval
with my vulnerability
open without guile
i appear before you
to gift my essence
my only possession
may it be a sweet incense
to your hurt pride
that causes you
to doubt all that reach in
& touch your humanity
see me now
gentle & easy i come
a tender breeze
across a hot brow
a loving spirit
of the present
leave the past behind you
it's over now
Published 24th Oct 2017
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Anonymous
25th Oct 2017 2:05am
Raven your approach in that of a tender breeze but yet one which feels met by a sting as if during a bitter NY blustery day against one's cheeks...this causes heart to feel weighted...I am sorry for any pain you feel...
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
25th Oct 2017 3:30am
thank you beautiful poetess for feeling & relating to my pain in this write.. ~Raven
28th Oct 2017 2:51am
this is beautifully written but I find it difficult to read, maybe it is too real, maybe the pain is too palpable don't take this the wrong way, this is a fantastic write :-)
Warm Hugs :-)
Warm Hugs :-)
2nd Nov 2017 3:14am
thank you dearest poet yes I think many who read this probably felt as you did it's a hard one to comment on.. I deeply cherish your thoughts..
~Raven
~Raven
29th Oct 2017 11:21am
I would echo David here, this was hard to read as your words seem dripping with obedience and dominance. Very relatable, my heart goes out to you Raven <3
2nd Nov 2017 3:15am
thank you dearest poetess yes I agree looking at this now it's a difficult write to read & comment on.. I deeply appreciate the love you showed me..
~Raven
~Raven
