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a poet's path
the buds of wisdom
are blooming
take her in
sweet fragrances
awake the senses
as she opens your mind
to new valleys of hope
sprinkled with daisies
of truth
they illuminate your path
out of the darkness
of a despairing past
unto enlightenment
where your soul
truly abides
as you take in the light
that is fed
in these poetry halls
poets great & small
raise their voice
showing the way
with divine inspiration
they guide hand in hand
from one heart to another
we are led
onward on this wonderful journey
through the thickets & brush
to our final destination
not a day too late
*Inspired by Poetryman's Don't Look Back
Published 22nd Oct 2017
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An uplifting, beautiful write. My favorite lines:
as you take in the light
that is fed
in these poetry halls
poets great & small
raise their voice
showing the way
Got kind of a rush reading this, actually. Thanks smackdownraven!
as you take in the light
that is fed
in these poetry halls
poets great & small
raise their voice
showing the way
Got kind of a rush reading this, actually. Thanks smackdownraven!
22nd Oct 2017 7:31pm
thank you i'm so happy to give you that good kind of rush today :) ~Raven
22nd Oct 2017 7:37pm
'onward on this wonderful journey
threw the thickets & brush
to our final destination
not a day too late." - - Oh how I hope you are right :-) - this was a fantastic write a positive battle hymn - loved it :-)
threw the thickets & brush
to our final destination
not a day too late." - - Oh how I hope you are right :-) - this was a fantastic write a positive battle hymn - loved it :-)
22nd Oct 2017 7:51pm
thank you David don't worry dear poet we will each get there right on time & while journeying we have each other to light the way :) ~Raven
Anonymous
22nd Oct 2017 7:51pm
This brought me a smile Raven...the mixing of daisies giving the light needed to get through darkness is a picture of loveliness...beautifully wrought...
Xoxo Taryn
Xoxo Taryn
22nd Oct 2017 8:08pm
thank you beautiful poetess i'm happy to bring you smiles with what my muse has gifted today :) ~Raven
22nd Oct 2017 9:29pm
I am humbled to have inspired such a wonderful and hopeful poem Raven!
Thank you for allowing my muse to tickle yours...
JJ
Thank you for allowing my muse to tickle yours...
JJ
24th Oct 2017 3:42pm
thank you dearest JJ your poem Don't Look Back really moved me.. ~Raven
22nd Oct 2017 9:58pm
I feel like this should be in "spiritual poems" because it has a very mystical feel and reminds me of folk songs about dying and going to Heaven. I enjoyed it a lot, thank you.
24th Oct 2017 3:43pm
thank you dearest poet you're right this could easily be in the spiritual section.. I love the vibe you got from reading this.. ~Raven
22nd Oct 2017 10:41pm
My beautiful, beautiful Raven. We have all watched you bloom since joining us and now another wonderful bouquet you have presented for our pleasure.
Your gift for poetry humbles me.
Your gift for poetry humbles me.
24th Oct 2017 3:44pm
thank you graciously beautiful Teri I am beaming from your comment :) ~Raven
"not a day too late" ...I am entranced, in awe at this moving write. You've written a garden upon my heart with your imagery.. Thank you for sharing Raven.
24th Oct 2017 3:45pm
aw thank you lovely poetess i'm smiling wide from your gracious comment :) ~Raven
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