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The Day I Die
The day I die will be the day
Everyone notices the sky is bluer
Their kites will fly higher
As I raise them into the atmosphere
The day I die will be the day
Every instrument is played
Everybody will know how to dance
Their songs will serenade me
The day I die will be the day
Nobody is forgotten
The hurting will find a healer
No person will go untreated
The day I die will be the day
Everyone is at ease
Finally they can breathe
The world will be as it should be
On that glorious day
Everyone notices the sky is bluer
Their kites will fly higher
As I raise them into the atmosphere
The day I die will be the day
Every instrument is played
Everybody will know how to dance
Their songs will serenade me
The day I die will be the day
Nobody is forgotten
The hurting will find a healer
No person will go untreated
The day I die will be the day
Everyone is at ease
Finally they can breathe
The world will be as it should be
On that glorious day
Published 20th Oct 2017
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- Edited 30th Jul 2018 7:47am
20th Oct 2017 3:42pm
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21st Oct 2017 5:13am
Stillborn, that means a lot to me! Thank you :) I'm so glad you dig it
20th Oct 2017 5:48pm
oh awesome write on passing.i love the imagery.i really like the first stanza about kites and the sky.i wrote one a few months back too.
https://zaroffpoetry.wordpress.com/2017/07/21/this-sparrow-they-no-longer-fly/
https://zaroffpoetry.wordpress.com/2017/07/21/this-sparrow-they-no-longer-fly/
21st Oct 2017 5:19am
Samael, thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I shared my thoughts on your "dark treasure" as I would call it. Thanks for stopping by :)
21st Oct 2017 1:57am
Fairy.. very powerful.. you have an old soul.. i mean that as a deep compliment.. love to you..
Dave
Dave
21st Oct 2017 5:21am
Dave, i am honored to be acknowledged as that, deeply flattered. Many thanks to you brother
21st Oct 2017 6:40am
"The day I die will be the day
Nobody is forgotten"
love love love these lines! great piece
Nobody is forgotten"
love love love these lines! great piece
22nd Oct 2017 5:18am
