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Is It Wisdom Or Just My Wisdom 7.3
(i) Sheeps
Beware not
The sheep in wolfs clothing
All they are is huff and puff
Nothing gets blown down
Beware
The wolf in sheep’s clothing
That wolf is at the door
For they are Jehovah’s Witnesses
(ii) Idiot
Why call a man an idiot
When you can prove
He’s an idiot
(iii) Conditions
I used to love
Unconditionally
But I had to put in
Some conditions
To prevent being
Shat on
(vi) Boom!
Red sky at night
North Koreans
Take fright
Red sky
In the morning
The USA
Are now bombing
(v) Play Ball
An apple a day
Keeps the doctor
Well away
As long as you
Baseball pitch it
Hard and fast
Hitting him
Between the eyes
(vi) Money
The colour of your money
Matters not, if you’re
Spending thousands
In a Vegas casino
Or being mugged
On the streets
Either way you’re
Being mugged
(vii) Diet
The latest dietary
Advice to help curb
The obesity crisis is
Eat a little and often
Sounds great until
You realise you’ve
Just eaten 431 snacks
Today so far
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Re. Is It Wisdom Or Just My Wisdom 7.3
18th Oct 2017 8:09pm
"(iii) Conditions
I used to love
Unconditionally
But I had to put in
Some conditions
To prevent being
Shat on"
damn it David i'm coming
in for my daily dose of wisdom
you have keen & beautiful mind..
I love this :)
love & hugs Brenda
I used to love
Unconditionally
But I had to put in
Some conditions
To prevent being
Shat on"
damn it David i'm coming
in for my daily dose of wisdom
you have keen & beautiful mind..
I love this :)
love & hugs Brenda
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Re: Re. Is It Wisdom Or Just My Wisdom 7.3
20th Oct 2017 3:44am
unconditional love given is not always returned in kind :-) thank you Brenda, glad you like them :-)))))))))))
Re. Is It Wisdom Or Just My Wisdom 7.3
18th Oct 2017 8:14pm
Re: Re. Is It Wisdom Or Just My Wisdom 7.3
20th Oct 2017 3:45am
Re. Is It Wisdom Or Just My Wisdom 7.3
David, definition of: An armed to the teeth drone, pounding targets and laying waste with wisdom and humor extraordinaire. My kind of ally for my kind of war.
Keep aiming true my friend.
Keep aiming true my friend.
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Re: Re. Is It Wisdom Or Just My Wisdom 7.3
20th Oct 2017 3:46am
the revolution starts here (LMAO) glad you liked them, thank you :-) Hugs :-))))))
Re. Is It Wisdom Or Just My Wisdom 7.3
19th Oct 2017 00:21am
dearest poet I am enjoying your wisdom series immensely
they are so damned clever & wise :)
~Raven
they are so damned clever & wise :)
~Raven
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Re: Re. Is It Wisdom Or Just My Wisdom 7.3
20th Oct 2017 3:48am
thank you so much dear Raven for the read and you so very kind words - they made me smile today :-))))))
Re. Is It Wisdom Or Just My Wisdom 7.3
19th Oct 2017 3:36am
Re: Re. Is It Wisdom Or Just My Wisdom 7.3
20th Oct 2017 3:50am
I like Belgian triple chocolate cookies, but I am not allowed them :-( I am glad you enjoyed them, hope they don't give you heartburn :-))))) Hugsssssssssssssss :-))))
Re. Is It Wisdom Or Just My Wisdom 7.3
19th Oct 2017 5:07pm
David...your little gems of wisdom shine with such brilliance....so much inner fire of insight... And with just the right amount of your wry wit, to make them rare jewels--to be sure!
My friend, these pieces not only cause me to pause, for a few thoughtful moments, but they leave more than a few smiles as well! I am still giggling at the mental picture of that apple hitting it's bulls-eye, right between the doctor's eyes...especially the image that brings to mind, a particular physician that i truly despise! (lol)
Eagerly looking forward to see what else is in your mind's (imagination's) treasure chest!
Hold on...light-hearted hugs heading your way!
My friend, these pieces not only cause me to pause, for a few thoughtful moments, but they leave more than a few smiles as well! I am still giggling at the mental picture of that apple hitting it's bulls-eye, right between the doctor's eyes...especially the image that brings to mind, a particular physician that i truly despise! (lol)
Eagerly looking forward to see what else is in your mind's (imagination's) treasure chest!
Hold on...light-hearted hugs heading your way!
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Re: Re. Is It Wisdom Or Just My Wisdom 7.3
20th Oct 2017 3:52am
thank you so much my dear friend - I am going to branch out the wisdom series not sure where it is going yet :-) It's always great to make you smile :-) Huge Hugs :-)
Re. Is It Wisdom Or Just My Wisdom 7.3
Anonymous
19th Oct 2017 9:08pm
You interweave humor and truth so seamlessly that even while I'm sighing I start giggling. I look forward to the wisdom of David because I know it was hard won and tempered with your signature tongue in cheek humor. Keep them coming! Huge huge hugs! :)
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20th Oct 2017 3:54am
thank you so much Ash - your comments always make my day - it's comments like these that inspire me to write :-) Huge big Hugs :-)