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Your Words
Your words
How much endearing
Whisper into my ear
Travel into the blood vessel
Swell up my every single cell
My body expands
Feather light
Summit height
Weightless delight
My soul starts to fly
My tongue couldn’t reply
I’ve been sealed
In the honey jar you supplied
Melted and drowned
By your deadly sweetness
With my incurable willingness
I am the worth vessel
For you to travel
Are you the worth tour
For me to explore
The journey is unpredictable
My heart is unshakable
Hope your words are steadfast
Unbreakable
How much endearing
Whisper into my ear
Travel into the blood vessel
Swell up my every single cell
My body expands
Feather light
Summit height
Weightless delight
My soul starts to fly
My tongue couldn’t reply
I’ve been sealed
In the honey jar you supplied
Melted and drowned
By your deadly sweetness
With my incurable willingness
I am the worth vessel
For you to travel
Are you the worth tour
For me to explore
The journey is unpredictable
My heart is unshakable
Hope your words are steadfast
Unbreakable
Published 18th Oct 2017
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18th Oct 2017 8:31am
as always..such smooth unforced rhyme...you deserve that unbreakable word... your lovely, determined thoughts flow into the ear fast...-J
18th Oct 2017 8:37am
Thank you for the fast comment. Glad you could hear them....they are gently from the deep down of heart......Always appreciate your support Jeff. Love, RoseJasmine
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18th Oct 2017 11:20am
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18th Oct 2017 11:52am
Hey Danny, thank you so much for the read and nice comment. Really enjoy your visit. RoseJasmine
19th Oct 2017 12:58pm
Damn...this is beautiful, heartwarming stuff RJ...n I see that rhyme n flow is gettin smoother n smoother! lol
19th Oct 2017 1:22pm
Dear Ric, so glad to read your comment. I do learn a lot from you to improve the skills of rhyme and flow lol. I have to thank you here, and appreciate your nice comment and the always support. Love, RoseJasmine
19th Oct 2017 4:51pm
Gotta add the kudos about flow ... l ease into it and float down the poetic stream!
19th Oct 2017 5:12pm
Hey LilDragonFly, glad to have your visit and comment. It's nice of you to add it to your RL. Thank you so much and appreciate your support. Love, RoseJasmine
24th Oct 2017 9:09am
24th Oct 2017 9:12am
Hey Xhrinic, nice to have your visit, and the comment I consider as a huge compliment. Nice to meet your here. I will read yours too. RoseJasmine
5th Nov 2017 6:30pm
You r on the flight to poetic success and well u resumed CAPS may be ur decision was best
6th Nov 2017 1:15am
Hmmm it doesn't sound like a compliment. Anyway, thank you Again. RoseJasmine
6th Nov 2017 3:48am
we shouldn't thrive on compliments only to improve some one like me must comment differently all poetry is not bad no good nor all we write is excellent lady
6th Nov 2017 3:53am
No problem. No matter what, it is your support. Appreciate sincerely.
Love, RoseJasmine
Love, RoseJasmine
7th Nov 2017 6:09am
normally sweet words have persuade...sweet words make feel as you are on the sky flying like loving angel...I like it and I appreciate you're technician of rhymes
7th Nov 2017 7:11am
Thank you Coolman, your comment maks me fly up in the sky. I am a true angel now.😊
7th Nov 2017 9:42am
7th Nov 2017 10:29am
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14th Nov 2017 12:47pm
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Thank you Silence. Your comment is as beautiful as a poem. Much appreciate your read.
Love, RoseJasmine
Love, RoseJasmine
