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Waking up
Waking from a somber sleep,
This life isn't mine to keep.
Cutting down the blood will flow,
Nobody will ever know.
This life isn't mine to keep.
Cutting down the blood will flow,
Nobody will ever know.
Published 18th Oct 2017
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18th Oct 2017 3:40am
Very nice rhyme and rhythm to this. A well crafted entry poem.
Welcome to the Deep Under......
AT
Welcome to the Deep Under......
AT
18th Oct 2017 3:50am
a very dark write
chilling me with the reminder
our lives are not ours to keep
then the blood flows in your poem
& I am utterly drawn in by it's dark beauty..
welcome dear poet..
love Crim
chilling me with the reminder
our lives are not ours to keep
then the blood flows in your poem
& I am utterly drawn in by it's dark beauty..
welcome dear poet..
love Crim
20th Oct 2017 8:57pm
