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You As a Small Child
Do you want the answer to that question
Then go in to yourself
Until you find yourself as a small child
Looking back at yourself
And then beg of that child the answer
Who am I that I am
When this who am I changes
Who remains
Great Drum, Myth and Psychology When the West was Lost - it had been my desire to discover where the journey had taken me and how far from where I'd begun
Then go in to yourself
Until you find yourself as a small child
Looking back at yourself
And then beg of that child the answer
Who am I that I am
When this who am I changes
Who remains
Great Drum, Myth and Psychology When the West was Lost - it had been my desire to discover where the journey had taken me and how far from where I'd begun
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Re. You As a Small Child
18th Oct 2017 1:18am
dearest Whale deeply thought provoking write
today I wrote a poem speaking of the my inner child
you have given me something to ponder
& I am left wondering the answer she would give..
deep write..
love Brenda
today I wrote a poem speaking of the my inner child
you have given me something to ponder
& I am left wondering the answer she would give..
deep write..
love Brenda
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Re: Re. You As a Small Child
18th Oct 2017 1:27am
Re: Re. You As a Small Child
18th Oct 2017 1:29am
that is strange indeed could be our muse is on the same wavelength.. this write is excellent & gives me much to reflect on.. love Brenda
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Re. You As a Small Child
18th Oct 2017 1:34am
Re: Re. You As a Small Child
18th Oct 2017 2:13am
...words I wish I'd written
Neither going forwards nor backwards bliss may be found
Shang Xian
Neither going forwards nor backwards bliss may be found
Shang Xian
Re. You As a Small Child
18th Oct 2017 3:21am
As a child, I used to dream,
Words that I have never seen,
Overwhelming heavy air,
Now I only see despair.
Sorry if this is out of place, I liked your poem and thought I'd share the one I came up with inspired by your work :)
Words that I have never seen,
Overwhelming heavy air,
Now I only see despair.
Sorry if this is out of place, I liked your poem and thought I'd share the one I came up with inspired by your work :)
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Re: Re. You As a Small Child
18th Oct 2017 8:56am
Re. You As a Small Child
18th Oct 2017 1:19pm
that small child inside of us remains true and real no matter the changes we go through...
provoking write Whale!Good one!
provoking write Whale!Good one!
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Re: Re. You As a Small Child
18th Oct 2017 9:18pm
Re. You As a Small Child
18th Oct 2017 4:55pm
dearest poet I will be seeking my inner child
& beg it this very question..
profound write..
~Raven
& beg it this very question..
profound write..
~Raven
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Re: Re. You As a Small Child
18th Oct 2017 9:19pm
Re. You As a Small Child
18th Oct 2017 10:38pm
I love the Buddhist undertones of this poignant piece whale...some say there is no-self...for me it is impermanent and always leaving itself behind...eternal rebirth. Great poem.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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Re: Re. You As a Small Child
19th Oct 2017 11:53am
Re. You As a Small Child
18th Oct 2017 11:07pm
Deep....
Deep even below the ocean depths where whales swim...
Deep. And provocative. Thank you deeply whale. *long bow
Deep even below the ocean depths where whales swim...
Deep. And provocative. Thank you deeply whale. *long bow
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Re: Re. You As a Small Child
19th Oct 2017 11:53am
Re. You As a Small Child
Anonymous
23rd Oct 2017 7:19pm
Im going to hold this next to my heart
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