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Sigh, baby...
Like the morn' sun
her heart, warms
Within the grasp
she's got me
under her thumb...
N' while all things
in life are unsure
No doubt here
her love is pure...
Published 9th Oct 2017
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9th Oct 2017 10:25pm
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9th Oct 2017 10:42pm
Aaaawww... Well that's great, n the RL is an honor too :) appreciate u sweetheart.
9th Oct 2017 11:19pm
so beautiful is this write dearest poet
gave me a smile as I let out a deep sigh
from its loveliness..
~Raven
gave me a smile as I let out a deep sigh
from its loveliness..
~Raven
9th Oct 2017 11:23pm
10th Oct 2017 00:52am
It's so romantic! Short yet loaded...! I can feel the love all the from here!
10th Oct 2017 1:00am
Thank you, I'm glad you can feel it makes writing worth it when others feel you... :)
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10th Oct 2017 2:40am
Leakage from an overflowing heart produces such beautiful poetry as displayed here.
Very much enjoyed is this one.
Very much enjoyed is this one.
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10th Oct 2017 12:55pm
This one just melts me ... you leave me puddled on the floor. So beautiful.
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11th Oct 2017 8:10am
very sweet, the thought of someone breaking you down so strongly with love
makes me want to harden my shell
makes me want to harden my shell
11th Oct 2017 10:41am
Harden ur she'll lol I hear ya bro! N I thank you always for the support :)
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12th Oct 2017 2:57am
This is very warm, loving and delicate, especially the second part, wow what can I say, such practical and real and make me breathless because of the grasp and thumb....hope someone grasp me tight and still make me enjoyable....
RoseJasmine
RoseJasmine
12th Oct 2017 3:14am
How wonderful you are my dear...truly thank you for your sweet words...appreciate that muchly... :)
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14th Oct 2017 6:53pm
Through a few words you have done something most can't. You've captured a feeling...a love...so pure and sweet. Such a romantic. 💋
14th Oct 2017 9:34pm
Aaaaawww...u Lil sweetie pie you! Thank you soooooo much, you've planted a big Ole cheesy smile on my face today... :)
