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Hidden treasures
My fingers glide graciously
over the curves of your body,
like a blind man tracing
the hidden secrets of a page of Braille.
My lips tenderly trace
the tattoos on you skin,
searching eagerly for
the sweet secrets of your soul.
Our bodies intertwined
like pen and paper,
our movements the stanzas
filling the page,
moving on towards
the climactic finale.
over the curves of your body,
like a blind man tracing
the hidden secrets of a page of Braille.
My lips tenderly trace
the tattoos on you skin,
searching eagerly for
the sweet secrets of your soul.
Our bodies intertwined
like pen and paper,
our movements the stanzas
filling the page,
moving on towards
the climactic finale.
Published 9th Oct 2017
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9th Oct 2017 6:20pm
dearest Wolfe pure erotic magic
so beautifully sensual
causing me to daydream..
~Raven
so beautifully sensual
causing me to daydream..
~Raven
9th Oct 2017 7:28pm
Just my intentions, enough to make the mind wander, then it is up to you. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Anonymous
9th Oct 2017 7:23pm
Such sensual beauty in these words here. Enough to seduce her utterly. Well done, Wolf
9th Oct 2017 7:47pm
The words came easily, hopefully they enchant. So far it seems so. Thank you for the compliments.
9th Oct 2017 8:20pm
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Anonymous
9th Oct 2017 11:57pm
Very nice Wolfe, pure seduction within these short lines...take a bow...
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
10th Oct 2017 00:54am
10th Oct 2017 3:05am
simply beautiful (and sexy) - inspiring write my friend:-) 12 out of 10 :-)
Excellent ink :-)
Excellent ink :-)
10th Oct 2017 3:16am
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10th Oct 2017 5:32pm
dearest Wolfe I especially love this part
in this deeply passionate & beautiful erotic..
"My lips tenderly trace
the tattoos on you skin,
searching eagerly for
the sweet secrets of your soul."
this is deeply erotic to me
because you are touching her soul
while your fingers search her body..
you have a way about you my friend..
love Crim
in this deeply passionate & beautiful erotic..
"My lips tenderly trace
the tattoos on you skin,
searching eagerly for
the sweet secrets of your soul."
this is deeply erotic to me
because you are touching her soul
while your fingers search her body..
you have a way about you my friend..
love Crim
10th Oct 2017 5:51pm
Thank you so much for appreciating this piece. That is just the feeling I was after. The desires of the heart and the body both coming together. They both scream inside me.
12th Oct 2017 8:47pm
12th Oct 2017 9:16pm
16th Oct 2017 7:03am
Beautifully written & your words are like music that touches the soul. Keep on writing & sharing :)
16th Oct 2017 12:04pm
18th Apr 2018 3:21pm
“the sweet secrets of your soul”
Erotic can mean different things to different people so in saying that ... this stirred my soul.
Beautifully written!
Always
Justafan
Erotic can mean different things to different people so in saying that ... this stirred my soul.
Beautifully written!
Always
Justafan
19th Apr 2018 4:58am
Thank you so much for the comments. The true mingling of the body and soul is so enticing and erotic. I am so glad that it stirred in you the same feelings I was after.
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