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Paean
Wintry wilting words
Whisked wistfully from her lips...
I’ve endeavored storms
I’ve felt the thistling thorns
Contemplations I’ve adorned ;
Busy embodiment of sacrilege
Abstruse confusions left amiss
Crucifix betwixt
Whistling wayward to new serendipities
Exalting forthright impassioned deities
I bow ~Namaste to thee
Published 8th Oct 2017
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8th Oct 2017 9:06pm
such beauty but for me so much sadness - beautifully crafted piece - you have so much skill and passion :-)
Wintry wilting words
Whisked wistfully from her lips... just wow - love it :-)
Wintry wilting words
Whisked wistfully from her lips... just wow - love it :-)
<3 You have such a big heart! Thank you~
I must give credit where credit is due! After brimming over AtoMikbomb's illustrious illustrations, I admit her lovely language has infected me on this one, especially with the Wintry Words :) Also, crimsin's -wildflower days- was so spiritually thirst-quenching it made me weep, and thus aroused the storms within me.
This community feeds me! :D
I imagine this piece being performed with a slow, heavy, stark seriousness- with breathy pauses between each lines- and ending in a tone of utter humility. The intonation to tell a story in itself, as though read from an archaic text.
Namaste to you David, and many more here!
I must give credit where credit is due! After brimming over AtoMikbomb's illustrious illustrations, I admit her lovely language has infected me on this one, especially with the Wintry Words :) Also, crimsin's -wildflower days- was so spiritually thirst-quenching it made me weep, and thus aroused the storms within me.
This community feeds me! :D
I imagine this piece being performed with a slow, heavy, stark seriousness- with breathy pauses between each lines- and ending in a tone of utter humility. The intonation to tell a story in itself, as though read from an archaic text.
Namaste to you David, and many more here!
9th Oct 2017 10:01am
The spiritual imagery within this is brilliant! Such Heavenly energy creates it's own Karmic serendipity...
JJ
JJ
9th Oct 2017 10:29am
From a master of imagery yourself, this is a helluva compliment! Thank you JJ!
I would be further amiss if I didn't acknowledge the stormy mood your -Stomping on the Sky- ushered me into. <3
I would be further amiss if I didn't acknowledge the stormy mood your -Stomping on the Sky- ushered me into. <3
9th Oct 2017 6:29pm
To think a poem I created from inspiration has moved another poet's spirit, even to a small degree is such a wonderful feeling! Thank you NB! JJ
10th Oct 2017 4:34pm
dearest NightBird this is utterly charged with power
great beauty is expressed through each line
I am completely enchanted & called forth to dance
in the storm's lilting winds..
i'm deeply honored to have inspired :)
love Crim
great beauty is expressed through each line
I am completely enchanted & called forth to dance
in the storm's lilting winds..
i'm deeply honored to have inspired :)
love Crim
11th Oct 2017 11:30pm
Let us dance! :) I’m so glad you enjoyed the read, thank you for the spell your poetry has cast upon me. <3
