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Dogwood #1
Kingdom rabbits are
Worry rabbits
They got the Shy Eyes
Like all timid creatures
They see things mostly
In periphery
Worry rabbits
They got the Shy Eyes
Like all timid creatures
They see things mostly
In periphery
Published 4th Oct 2017
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4th Oct 2017 10:53pm
Very clever... A collectivity, that has long lost its lion heart, can only see in periphery... Very appropriate and original allegory.
5th Oct 2017 3:48pm
Hey thanks man. So interesting how comments can reveal an aspect of your work that you yourself were only dimly aware of. I guess that's how it works :)
5th Oct 2017 4:02pm
You welcome!... I'm glad you see my interpretation as covering an aspect of your poem.
I enjoyed the form and message very much. Those who worry live in fear ( "Kingdom" made me think of religion ). Those who live in fear are so busy worrying about what's going on around them they overlook the most important place to find the Truth: themselves.
5th Oct 2017 4:07pm
I'm glad you enjoyed it! Yes there is an otherness to 'Kingdom' isn't there. A place that exists but is somehow removed. Your comments encourage me to retrace the poem. The above and below of it. Cheers Ahavati :)
