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Twenty
Twenty, the number of victims
So
Far
Twenty put their case for salvation
They
Lost
Twenty kneeling before
Their
God
Twenty cursed that fraud well before
Torture
Finished
Twenty screamed the same screams
Selectively
Deaf
Twenty buried randomly in the woods
Shallow
Graves
Twenty will become forty or fifty during,
My
Reign
Just really getting started: are you my
Next
Victim?
Published 30th Sep 2017
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30th Sep 2017 2:05am
David the serial killer, we need a much catchier name than that. Enjoyed it!!
Thank you for the write.
Thank you for the write.
30th Sep 2017 8:46am
30th Sep 2017 6:03pm
30th Sep 2017 11:05pm
30th Sep 2017 2:13pm
Shivers!! David...such a darkly, disquieting piece---the confession of an egomaniacal, deranged serial slayer!
And your signature twist at the conclusion is a simple, direct statement that is so effectively eerie!
This one has a way of sliding it's icy fingers up and down my spine! A psychologically chilling scribe!!!
(When your darker-half emerges....wellll...not so sure if i want to be close enough for hugs...(lol) !!) ) ;p
And your signature twist at the conclusion is a simple, direct statement that is so effectively eerie!
This one has a way of sliding it's icy fingers up and down my spine! A psychologically chilling scribe!!!
(When your darker-half emerges....wellll...not so sure if i want to be close enough for hugs...(lol) !!) ) ;p
30th Sep 2017 6:02pm
Lol - I am as harmless as a kitten unless I am on the defence - it's the huggers that are the safe ones (lol) Hug big hugs :-)
Anonymous
2nd Oct 2017 3:47pm
Okay, I started reading this thinking to myself...uh oh, what tragedy have I missed in the news now? And by the time I reached the end I was smacking myself in the forehead. It's a signature David's Vengeance piece. You write these so well. I do hope I'm not next...hugs?
2nd Oct 2017 5:20pm
Now you're not - as long as you behave and don't upset the baby jesus :-) LOL
thank you - glad you liked it
thank you - glad you liked it
