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Losing it
Losing your
Virginity
Is to be
Expected,
Losing your
Mind is just
Fuckin
Careless
Written by
David_Macleod
(14397816)
Published 28th Sep 2017
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Re. Losing it
28th Sep 2017 2:15am
Re: Re. Losing it
29th Sep 2017 1:03am
LMAO at the who came first - excellent choice of words :-))))) thank you :-)
Re. Losing it
28th Sep 2017 3:12am
The worst part about losing your mind is trying to find it again. At least when you've lost your virginity, you always remember where it went...
Another great write David!
JJ
Another great write David!
JJ
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Re: Re. Losing it
29th Sep 2017 1:02am
thank you my friend - can certainly remember the virginity thing - that was frought :-)
Re. Losing it
28th Sep 2017 3:23am
Re: Re. Losing it
29th Sep 2017 1:01am
LOL - I should put my keys on a rope tied around my neck :-) glad you got a LOL :-)
Re. Losing it
28th Sep 2017 4:13am
I still know where my virginity went. Somewhere in Minnesota. I hope it stays there
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Re: Re. Losing it
29th Sep 2017 1:00am
Re. Losing it
Didn't lose my virginity, I know where it is, and who took it. Hope he never brings it back.
And having a child, can be just "carless Fucking".
The "mind" is another "matter"
Nice write, Poet.
And having a child, can be just "carless Fucking".
The "mind" is another "matter"
Nice write, Poet.
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Re: Re. Losing it
29th Sep 2017 00:59am
LOL - "careless fucking" thank you so much for the read, the comments and most of all the smiles and laughs :-)
Re. Losing it
28th Sep 2017 1:53pm
David you clever mind always amazes me
giggles this is great :)
love & hugs Brenda
giggles this is great :)
love & hugs Brenda
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Re: Re. Losing it
29th Sep 2017 00:57am
it's only there because poets like you inspire me :-) Thank you my dear friend - Huge Hugs :-)
Re. Losing it
28th Sep 2017 3:11pm
When i finished reading, i was reminded of this quote : "Of all the things i have lost, I miss my mind the most!" Now, while there remains a continuing controversy, as to its origin, it seems the most widely accepted credit belongs to Mark Twain!
And, my Friend, like this well-known author, you possess a signature wry wit that your followers have come to adore....with this piece showcasing another remarkable example of this clever literary skill of yours!
David....Many,many SMILES with this one!
A sly scribe...creatively crafted enjoyment!
And, my Friend, like this well-known author, you possess a signature wry wit that your followers have come to adore....with this piece showcasing another remarkable example of this clever literary skill of yours!
David....Many,many SMILES with this one!
A sly scribe...creatively crafted enjoyment!
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Re: Re. Losing it
29th Sep 2017 00:55am
you are so sweet :-) too, too, kind :-0 I love the fact that you like my micro poems as well - thank you Huge Big Hugs :-)
Re. Losing it
29th Sep 2017 00:31am
Re: Re. Losing it
29th Sep 2017 00:53am
well as long as you only want to eat it - I'm your man :-) Thanks mate :-)
Re. Losing it
29th Sep 2017 6:26am
Re: Re. Losing it
30th Sep 2017 6:13pm
thank you so much - sometimes less is more as they say :-) I am glad you got it :-)
Re. Losing it
29th Sep 2017 2:08pm
Re: Re. Losing it
30th Sep 2017 6:15pm
I wrote it from personal experience (LOL) thank you for the read and for getting it :-)
Re. Losing it
Anonymous
2nd Oct 2017 3:39pm
What about losing your shit? Because if I lost my mind I think I would lose my shit entirely. It does wander from time to time but I keep a pretty close eye on it. So many hugs
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Re: Re. Losing it
2nd Oct 2017 5:12pm
I am sorry to drag shit into your kitchen but I have never lost me shit - I turn around and there it is - every time :-) thank you :-) losing your shit in scotland is to "Loose the Heid" Much muchier hugs :-)
Re: Re. Losing it
29th Jun 2019 4:20am