deepundergroundpoetry.com
PB & JAM
Comfort food
thick substance
between nutty lips;
sticky fisted
picnic grip
Fruity JAM;
peach, estery
buttered maltol
of contrast;
frosty smooth . . .
or grape'd
diffusing dry roast -
perfumey, fresh
pur'pley Concord
duo deep and Ripe
seeded across
taste buds
Love
pressed between
Wondered bread
sliding right
down
the throat
~
thick substance
between nutty lips;
sticky fisted
picnic grip
Fruity JAM;
peach, estery
buttered maltol
of contrast;
frosty smooth . . .
or grape'd
diffusing dry roast -
perfumey, fresh
pur'pley Concord
duo deep and Ripe
seeded across
taste buds
Love
pressed between
Wondered bread
sliding right
down
the throat
~
Published 26th Sep 2017
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 12
reading list entries 1
comments 13
reads 1258
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
27th Sep 2017 00:05am
A delightfully dewicious poem! 💜
Who doesn't lovvvvvvvvve peanut butter???
And how could anyone not love JAM ??? [nonsense]
"Comfort food
thick substance
between nutty lips;
sticky fisted
picnic grip"
Ummm ...... YUMMMMMMMM! I already had a PB sandwich today, but that stanza made want dip my finger in a jar and suck it clean!
Who doesn't lovvvvvvvvve peanut butter???
And how could anyone not love JAM ??? [nonsense]
"Comfort food
thick substance
between nutty lips;
sticky fisted
picnic grip"
Ummm ...... YUMMMMMMMM! I already had a PB sandwich today, but that stanza made want dip my finger in a jar and suck it clean!
☝ 👇
💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
I adore things like that....food I can't do without. Don't you?
It comforts you, doesn't it?
~ Susan, Meet Joe Black
[nonsense]
💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
I adore things like that....food I can't do without. Don't you?
It comforts you, doesn't it?
~ Susan, Meet Joe Black
[nonsense]
27th Sep 2017 1:26am
27th Sep 2017 2:01am
In the realm of peanut butter lovers. . ." There is no Spoon. . . " [ nonsense ]
Thank you coldly fused one!
Thank you coldly fused one!
27th Sep 2017 2:07am
Well yea, I've always always loved PB&J sandwiches, but after this? I love them deeply!! lol
27th Sep 2017 2:09am
LOL! I'm glad I could deepen your love of PB&J, PoeticOne! Mine's been deepened too!
27th Sep 2017 6:41am
27th Sep 2017 12:06pm
Anonymous
- Edited 30th Jan 2023 2:45pm
27th Sep 2017 1:35pm
<< post removed >>
Anonymous
27th Sep 2017 1:47pm
lol oh my gawd i want some now!
27th Sep 2017 10:32pm
30th Sep 2017 11:01pm
Love the sound and taste of this one - descriptions are awesome :-)
Big Huge Like :-)
Big Huge Like :-)
14th Oct 2017 11:25pm
