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She Warned You

Her words came clear and crisp from God-like lips, "I am crazy, are you ready for that?" Meaning these words to the fullest extent, she looked on serious, picking her fingers while waiting for an answer. "Of course", he replied and lightly laughed it off.
 
As years go by they love and cherish. They blossom like a hot sun expanding beyond its solar systems reach. Each day the words are said, "I love you." Each day there is meaning.
 
Slowly he begins to see the cracks within her. One by one he starts peeling back in disgust a piece of the layers, half out of curiosity, half out of need for more. Each habit, each word, analyzed to the core of the meaning.  
 
Tension turns to arguments. Arguments to fights. Her temper snapping quick like wild fire in a dry forest. The sun they built with love passion and sparks of lust now exploding, mixed emotions, destruction, taking all of life with it. Red Giant.  
 
The feelings pushing out. Their love is now unknown affecting every part of their lives. Friends are pushed away. He is more disgusted. Feeding on her weakness, her annoying habits, her crazy. Planetary Nebula.  
 
The end is near. The end, the final stages. Pushing opposite directions, their love, affection is dying. They love no more. Their sun now so small and cold, so cold it's lost its color. White Dwarf.  
 
Glorious and painful to look at. The past were the days to remember. There was light and life, breathing. All gone.The words had passed on her lips are distant and corrupted, "I am crazy, are you ready for that?" Dissipating gas...
Written by Monkeymaham2
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