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Halflife
It feels familiar
Twinge, regret--
Rain on skin
Bare and open
I peel back layers
Festering beneath
Memories, memories
Brooding razor-teeth
Ravishing
Damaging
I know-
I live quietly
Not quite alive...
Twinge, regret--
Rain on skin
Bare and open
I peel back layers
Festering beneath
Memories, memories
Brooding razor-teeth
Ravishing
Damaging
I know-
I live quietly
Not quite alive...
Published 22nd Sep 2017
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22nd Sep 2017 11:52am
23rd Sep 2017 12:32pm
22nd Sep 2017 10:34pm
23rd Sep 2017 12:33pm
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed the piece. Your read and thoughts are greatly appreciated. ~anonshadow
23rd Sep 2017 4:22am
23rd Sep 2017 12:34pm
23rd Sep 2017 5:20pm
Short but packing one helluva punch. Nice language and imagery. That ending though; quite superb.
23rd Sep 2017 5:41pm
Glad you liked that ending, I'll admit I actually wrote the ending and then wrote the poem around it, thanks for reading and leaving your thoughts! ~anonshadow
24th Sep 2017 8:08am
24th Sep 2017 11:49am
29th Sep 2017 11:46pm
30th Sep 2017 1:58pm
Thank you, really glad you enjoyed it. Appreciate your kind words:) ~anonshadow
