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Quarter Till Midnight
Standing in an open field
Quarter till midnight
Counting the stars
Just staring up into the sky
Not many are out
Not many do I see
Maybe one or two
Possibly three
It's calm and clear
In the world tonight
Not much is happening
A quarter till midnight
Quarter till midnight
Counting the stars
Just staring up into the sky
Not many are out
Not many do I see
Maybe one or two
Possibly three
It's calm and clear
In the world tonight
Not much is happening
A quarter till midnight
Published 21st Sep 2017
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21st Sep 2017 4:20pm
This brought back some nice memories - I used to go into a field and lie down star gazing - I didn't know much about them apart from the fact they were beautiful and dreamy - I enjoyed this poem very much - so few words but beautifully put :-)
excellent Ink :-)
excellent Ink :-)
21st Sep 2017 4:25pm
I too enjoy looking at the stars though I don't know much about them either. Thank you :)
21st Sep 2017 9:05pm
Interesting imagery. It feels like more is happening than meets the eye. The stars are always out, trillions of them in all directions, but you only see a few. Are your eyes clouded or is the sky? Do you see more than I?
JJ
JJ
21st Sep 2017 10:09pm
I often look and wonder when looking out into the night which one is a sun or a moon or planet, I loved how it flowed welcome to DUP 😊
22nd Sep 2017 00:08am
I reversed the written meaning and found you in a state of ataraxia...everything is happening but you were free. Love it.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
22nd Sep 2017 00:50am
