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Are You There?
waves of waves
of you appealing
waves of waves
of inner feeling
tantalize
with visions
then surprise
with the precision
heart to heart
communications
at the start
of new sensations
in the space
that's in between us
in the place
in which we dream as
the swelling
of emotion
keeps upwelling
in the ocean
where waves of waves
of you appealing
fill the caves
of inner feeling
of you appealing
waves of waves
of inner feeling
tantalize
with visions
then surprise
with the precision
heart to heart
communications
at the start
of new sensations
in the space
that's in between us
in the place
in which we dream as
the swelling
of emotion
keeps upwelling
in the ocean
where waves of waves
of you appealing
fill the caves
of inner feeling
Published 15th Sep 2017
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15th Sep 2017 10:33am
Love the rhythm with this one ... of course waves are magic. Nice poeting
15th Sep 2017 2:36pm
Thank you...just noticed the poem was messed up somehow..verses missing...proper verses are you there are you listening are you aware there's a mist in the swelling of emotion now upwelling and in motion in the space that's in between us in the place in which we dream as waves of waves of you appealing waves of waves of inner feeling tantalize with visions then surprise with the precision heart to heart communications at the start of new sensations in the space that's in between us in the place in which we dream as the swelling of emotion keeps upwelling in the ocean where waves of waves of you appealing fill the caves of inner feeling
