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He's Won

if we were
to lie naked
together
side by side
he would be judged
prettier because
of his buff tanned body.

my favorite
male porn star
I mean.

he would win
and get the part.

even though the psychic said
he has a broken soul
he would still
win in the end.

at least when
he's down.
but not out.

he would win
and my life
would be ruined.

him - making the big bucks
in porn.

he won the lottery
the genetic one
what luck
a broken soul, maybe
but a body
like an Adonis
opening doors.

and - the best part is
he is so fucking hyperaware
of his muscular, tanned and toned body
it's not funny.

would he ever talk to a mere commoner like me?

he's got a gorgeous body
to fall back on
to make his 💰
with his hard on.

what do I have?
if I become redundant?
social assistance?
or possible homelessness.
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A free style poem on men's body image with no set meter. (oh, and on how hot my favorite male porn star is!🔥💋🔥)
Written by astrosleuth
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