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A Long Time Spent Long Ago

My body shaking alight with dancing fire
Filled with excitement feel about to burst
Oh what she did to me
And I can hear her with her moans and shrieks
As I flayed her body with fingers, tongue and cock
I gave it right on back
Hours and hours of electric pleasure
Days spent without leaving that room
Stopping only to smoke and drink some cool, cool water
Before we’d start again
Days and nights of carnal delight
Oh what we’d do in that sweaty room
I miss those things that she did to me
And all the days riding round the town
Or sitting in the pub writing poetry
Trying to cook that perfect meal
Just to end up with pizza brought round
I remember the laughter we shared
It was such a part of our lives
All the parties with friends
And the days spent alone with each other
I miss how we were together
I miss how she was with me
But when the end came round
Out of the blue it seems to me
I don’t miss the way she chose to say goodbye
I don’t miss what she did to me
Written by thinlane
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