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Kissing in the snow
Verse 1:
I'm walking down the path we both made when we first laid the plans
Ring in our new life...
Holding hands while we would run so far away from those who snuff our light
Shine on our new life...
Chorus:
Kissing in the Snow
The flakes fall on the road
She tastes like wine
Still on the vine
I love her more each day...
Verse 2:
When we were only babes we would play and daydream all-day
About this mystery life...
Never knowing that we would wake from both our sleep and see appear
Burn on our new fire
Chorus:
Kissing in the Snow
The flakes fall on the road
She tastes like wine
Still on the vine
I love her more each day...
Guitar solo
Verse 2
Chorus
lyrics, vocals, piano, drums, cheesy video: Jeff Simpson(Mindtrain)
music: Jason Bradberry, Jeff Simpson
guitar solo: Jason Bradberry
I'm walking down the path we both made when we first laid the plans
Ring in our new life...
Holding hands while we would run so far away from those who snuff our light
Shine on our new life...
Chorus:
Kissing in the Snow
The flakes fall on the road
She tastes like wine
Still on the vine
I love her more each day...
Verse 2:
When we were only babes we would play and daydream all-day
About this mystery life...
Never knowing that we would wake from both our sleep and see appear
Burn on our new fire
Chorus:
Kissing in the Snow
The flakes fall on the road
She tastes like wine
Still on the vine
I love her more each day...
Guitar solo
Verse 2
Chorus
lyrics, vocals, piano, drums, cheesy video: Jeff Simpson(Mindtrain)
music: Jason Bradberry, Jeff Simpson
guitar solo: Jason Bradberry
Published 8th Sep 2017
| Edited 1st Sep 2020
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8th Sep 2017 8:23am
8th Sep 2017 8:25am
8th Sep 2017 10:20am
I love this, especially the chorus. Kissing in the snow, makes me think about skiing and stepping off the trail in a secluded wood ... "She taste like wine/still on the vine" is a tight rhyme with a great line break, evokes such freshness!
8th Sep 2017 10:25am
thanks sweetie...it is a first mix...I am remixing now and will probably replace the audio coming up...thanks for the positive vibe...it was inspired by you...big hug!-J
8th Sep 2017 10:54am
You welcome ... so glad to be your muse. I was thinking more about snow and wine ... have you ever had ice wine? It's German, they literally let the grapes freeze on the vine and then make the wine ... it is delicious!
8th Sep 2017 11:17am
more synchronicity love...my friend Jason and I added the organ part and guitar solo to this song in Essen Germany 2 weeks ago...you are reading the Akashic record...-J
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8th Sep 2017 8:39pm
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8th Sep 2017 9:40pm
Thanks Emerald...it was written to sing...I am not sure it reads very smooth...gracious for the romantic label...that is something another person has to to give you...kisses-J
10th Sep 2017 3:20am
Hey J.......this is awesome.......glad you've shared this wonderful piece with us........luv the lyrics and voices and music......very talented.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
10th Sep 2017 3:26am
hey purple luv...thanks so much...it is a ruff mix..which i am remixing now...so glad you enjoyed...-J
14th Sep 2017 7:31am
This is such a beautiful song. I almost danced with the background music. The lyrics are romamtic and your voice is soft and tender....oh feel very nice to hear that! Thank you for sharing your talent!
RoseJasmine
RoseJasmine
14th Sep 2017 7:40am
Jasmine..thank you, love...I'm so glad you liked the song...you make me feel so warm..and feel free to dance anytime ..all music should move people in some way...just as i'm am moved by my friends, like you, with so many wonderful poetic ideas to dream with...gracious sweet heart -J
14th Sep 2017 7:54am
J, you deserve the praise. for these line:
I'm walking down the path we both made when we first laid the plans
Ring in our new life...
Holding hands while we would run so far away from those who snuff our light
Shine on our new life...
I added this poem to my reading list and I will always dance with it.....
RoseJasmine
I'm walking down the path we both made when we first laid the plans
Ring in our new life...
Holding hands while we would run so far away from those who snuff our light
Shine on our new life...
I added this poem to my reading list and I will always dance with it.....
RoseJasmine
Anonymous
27th Sep 2017 6:29pm
Wow, definitely felt this. Gorgeous:)
28th Sep 2017 9:12am
20th Nov 2017 4:42am
Have to admit...
This isn't my first time coming back to this work..
You have such great talent and a smooth voice Jeff...! :)
Things do come easier when you have a lovely muse like LilDragonfly..
I admire your skillz!
(and I agree the video is a lil' cheesy but it's sweet lol)
Love,
-H-
This isn't my first time coming back to this work..
You have such great talent and a smooth voice Jeff...! :)
Things do come easier when you have a lovely muse like LilDragonfly..
I admire your skillz!
(and I agree the video is a lil' cheesy but it's sweet lol)
Love,
-H-
5th May 2018 6:45am
Very Nice , Jeff...
Thank you for pointing me to it ;
Now , due to my age , this reminds me of some
of the "dreamy" , light acid rock / jazz of the 1960's ,
or early '70's...
Brought back layin' on the grass , trippin' with the girlfriend ,
listening to a free concert in Golden Gate Park !
Thank you for pointing me to it ;
Now , due to my age , this reminds me of some
of the "dreamy" , light acid rock / jazz of the 1960's ,
or early '70's...
Brought back layin' on the grass , trippin' with the girlfriend ,
listening to a free concert in Golden Gate Park !
5th May 2018 4:10pm
That is a great feeling ..so glad you got that impression....I was born in '72....so all that music then was soaked up by my little kid mind...
8th Aug 2018 00:13am
What a great song, runaway! The rhythm goes very well, and the lyrics portray a sweet love. My only recommendation would be to raise the volume of the voice, or lower the instrumental volume.
Thanks so much for participating in my competition!
Thanks so much for participating in my competition!
8th Aug 2018 00:17am
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Anonymous
11th Sep 2019 3:22pm
Been meaning to add this poem to my reading list for a few weeks since we sent the message about appearing in the podcast (this song will be featured in the September show btw, as per your permission)
I just love the laid back feel to this. It's a really well rendered little snippet. Thoroughly enjoyed.
Thank you for sharing
-M
I just love the laid back feel to this. It's a really well rendered little snippet. Thoroughly enjoyed.
Thank you for sharing
-M
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