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Flash Fiction Friday
Hair washed, clothes on, school run
Numbers picked, lotto done, game won!
Barbie lit, food gone, sun set
Published 8th Sep 2017
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8th Sep 2017 6:02am
8th Sep 2017 4:00pm
8th Sep 2017 10:14pm
I remember a time that days lasted an eternity. How our lives have become an experiment in speed and how cleverly your poem captures this threatening reality...
8th Sep 2017 10:21pm
Thank you for reading, even though it was a short one, it captured what I wanted to say.
10th Sep 2017 3:27am
Hey Purple......wish some of my days were like this.......very thought provoking ink....few but powerful feelings you cleverly inked.......enjoyed......purple luv & hugs xo :)
10th Sep 2017 1:25pm
Thanks for stopping by Flowergirl. I'm not sure about thought provoking, lol. It's really just a few words thrown together but it's nice to think the day could end nicely like this. Love & Hugs. x
Anonymous
14th Sep 2017 00:25am
excellent!
14th Sep 2017 00:27am
23rd Sep 2017 00:22am
Love every moment as those, especially hair washed, wow that freshness is like in the heaven....love your humor and witty words....RoseJasmine
23rd Sep 2017 00:51am
Anonymous
29th Sep 2017 10:57pm
Please pass me the recipe for days like these lol.
Made me smile :)
Made me smile :)
29th Sep 2017 10:58pm
