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Drowning

In a quiet place  
Not doing much    
If I am    
It's not so fun like you think..    
   
Unmotivated to make a move    
There's no benefit    
   
Awaiting the fishing hook    
Save me..    
I'm drowning    
Sinking deeper    
   
 The sunlight can't even reach me.  
Who can save me?    
     
The fish are free here    
It's their home    
Lucky them    
Only if I were a fish    
   
The beyond odd creatures down here    
Maybe I belong here
But I'm losing my breath    
How ironic    
   
Everyone left    
After realizing how useless I was    
I didn't spark up much    
They're over there    
   
I thought I lost my hearing    
But it's just that no one is here    
   
I only hear my silent screams    
But no one can hear them    
I'm too deep down    
Yet I still try    
   
It was deep blue for a while    
Now it's dark    
I was almost alive for a while    
   
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Written by tmoj
Published | Edited 22nd Aug 2018
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