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thoughts of a courtesan
you crashed into me
when I wasn't looking
with your salty soul
burnt the hurt places
cauterized my pain
i fell into your world
your masculine spice
that lingers on the wind
after you've had your way
with your backhand sex-tease
& i'm left sated
your ego fed
each retreats
to come together when we need it
when no other can give us that fix
you know the one
that cocaine like rush
we cum down
& return to the distance between us
where i fill the void
with whiskey chasers
& lunch with the ladies
a proper woman once again
no longer a wanton courtesan
until the pressure builds
& i am summoned to your court
a willing slave
chained to lust
where the worst
& best of us is fed
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
Published 4th Sep 2017
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4th Sep 2017 9:16pm
4th Sep 2017 9:51pm
Anonymous
5th Sep 2017 00:25am
I've often wondered why anyone would want to be a proper lady? Where's the fire and the fun in that? Beautiful write, my lovely Dark Angel. I do so love you
5th Sep 2017 4:25pm
ha you're right lovely one being a proper lady is no fun :) thank you for a wonderful comment.. love you.. Crim
5th Sep 2017 2:05am
dark and sexy, you are always so good at these - I've tried, but I just cant do them :-(
special ink :-) Big Hugs :-)
special ink :-) Big Hugs :-)
5th Sep 2017 4:26pm
thank you David graciously.. while you may not write these you are very clever & witty where I am not.. love & hugs Brenda
5th Sep 2017 3:05pm
I feel like this is more of an erotic than a love poem, and a very good erotic poem at that. The central theme of the lovers retreating and re-uniting is well-conveyed, and I like the final metaphor of the court and slave.
5th Sep 2017 4:28pm
thank you graciously Jack I suppose you are right this is more erotic I guess I didn't put it in that category because people expect straight up porn there more often than not.. love you my friend.. Brenda
5th Sep 2017 4:30pm
That's why we need more poems like yours, that are genuinely erotic and not just porn, there!
5th Sep 2017 4:39pm
Anonymous
5th Sep 2017 10:17pm
My Beautiful Brenda, ain't it always the way? We get hit when we're not looking and then find ourselves waiting and listening for any sign of that mating call, lol....I loved this so very much! I've gotta find a way to keep her!
I love you deeply my love
yours always & forever
xoxo Taryn
I love you deeply my love
yours always & forever
xoxo Taryn
6th Sep 2017 00:53am
thank you my love I love the way you see this write yeah that's the way of things it seems :) you made my week I love you passionately.. love Brenda
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16th Sep 2017 7:40pm
thank you beautiful Daniella too true sexy thoughts on lunch with the ladies ;) love Brenda
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