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fuck
fuck you
if all you care about
is what the hell I look like
you can kiss my fat ass
this world hasn't broken me
& believe me its tried
i'll be damned
if I let something so petty
make me cry in my tea
truly I feel free
free from lames
who just look at me
like I'm some kind of blow up doll
made to shoot a load in
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
if all you care about
is what the hell I look like
you can kiss my fat ass
this world hasn't broken me
& believe me its tried
i'll be damned
if I let something so petty
make me cry in my tea
truly I feel free
free from lames
who just look at me
like I'm some kind of blow up doll
made to shoot a load in
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. fuck
4th Sep 2017 9:37pm
Wow. Who dares treat my Lady Crim this way? I detest such shallow people.
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4th Sep 2017 9:47pm
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4th Sep 2017 10:19pm
Whomever made u feel like that, needs a royal asswhoopin...too bad I'm not where u are to administer it...
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4th Sep 2017 10:24pm
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4th Sep 2017 11:08pm
Wonderfully expressed Bren! Unfortunately there are far too many people who judge others for superficial shit. They are shallow, worthless oxygen thieves who should stop stealing the air that worms need to breathe...
Squish him under your foot to become food for the worms he has robbed!
JJ
Squish him under your foot to become food for the worms he has robbed!
JJ
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Re: Re. fuck
4th Sep 2017 11:28pm
thank you dearest JJ just expressing a feeling here we all face it in life being judged on how we appear alone.. it pisses me off so I wrote about it.. love you.. Brenda
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Anonymous
5th Sep 2017 00:22am
Bloody hell, beautiful one! Lay the smack down hard on anyone foolish enough to judge you on what they perceive with shallow eyes! Hugging you fiercely and loving you just as hard!
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5th Sep 2017 9:18pm
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5th Sep 2017 9:21pm
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Re. fuck
5th Sep 2017 1:25am
Damn crimsin fine ink and yeah I think you summed it up with your title Fuck,
The problem with people today is it's all about social media a woman has to look like Kim big thighs small waste and small brains,
Always remember us here at DUP look past all the plastic people we love your ink and I have know doubt your soul is beautiful now that is true beauty,
Keep your head up high and tell them all to go fuck them selfs haha 😂
The problem with people today is it's all about social media a woman has to look like Kim big thighs small waste and small brains,
Always remember us here at DUP look past all the plastic people we love your ink and I have know doubt your soul is beautiful now that is true beauty,
Keep your head up high and tell them all to go fuck them selfs haha 😂
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Re: Re. fuck
5th Sep 2017 9:23pm
thank you Epic One for such a fantastic comment you made my day & gifted me smiles :) love Crim
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5th Sep 2017 2:01am
I am available for five bucks to kill any and all of these people - I work cheap, for the love of it :-)
angry vent that I really get :-) Lotsa Huge Big Hugs :-)
angry vent that I really get :-) Lotsa Huge Big Hugs :-)
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Re: Re. fuck
5th Sep 2017 9:29pm
thank you David lol :) your comment gave me the giggles.. love & hugs.. Brenda
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5th Sep 2017 4:26am
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5th Sep 2017 9:30pm
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5th Sep 2017 7:43pm
Woe to those who would degrade you. Zero tolerance for abuse. Love this fierce and powerful write Lady Crim.
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5th Sep 2017 9:32pm
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Anonymous
5th Sep 2017 10:11pm
My Beautiful Brenda, I had to scroll all the way to Chine to get to the bottom where I could finally leave me tardy thoughts...please forgive me...there are some people who stop looking once they see the surface of anything, even themselves sometimes, never to see what is on the inside is the most important...it is that very inside, one which is ugly which causes these people to stop where they do...we all have different tastes, different palates and what might turn another off, may be the creme de la'creme for another...one will never know if they don't delve in to all the goodness which waits on the inside....therefore, all that being said....let me gather with Hades so we can give a proper ass whoopin....
I love you madly, deeply, passionately
both inside and out
your always & forever
xoxo Taryn
I love you madly, deeply, passionately
both inside and out
your always & forever
xoxo Taryn
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6th Sep 2017 3:11am
thank you my love you always know what to say to soothe my soul..I take people for who they are that's not to say I can't appreciate the good looking.. I just know that a person's soul can either shine beautifully or ugly.. we are taste testers of the wine of the soul.. I love you passionately.. love Brenda
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6th Sep 2017 00:56am
Brenda.. like Hades said.. anyone who looks at you that way.. deserves an ass kicking.. no one looks at my sister that way.. love you..
Dave
Dave
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6th Sep 2017 3:13am
thank you Dave you made me giggle though I know you mean every word just that you moved me.. I'm tickled by your protectiveness.. love you my brother.. Brenda
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7th Sep 2017 1:08am
HELL YEAH! amen sister! all some people care about is LOOKS!!! They don't want to hear us talk or even listen to a single word, just only go based on what sexual things they want! I am with you! Such PIGS! thank you for posting this!
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9th Sep 2017 2:15pm
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7th Sep 2017 5:40am
Can definitely feel the perfectly justifiable anger in every line. Simply put, people suck, in general
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9th Sep 2017 2:16pm
thank you Obsessed One yeah we all get this kind of treatment male & female alike.. love Crim
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8th Sep 2017 12:55pm
fuck yes to this epic fuck you
& a resounding fuck no to the fucktard who inspired it.
whose tyres are we slashing, beautiful one?
love you heaps
xoxoxoxo
& a resounding fuck no to the fucktard who inspired it.
whose tyres are we slashing, beautiful one?
love you heaps
xoxoxoxo
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Re: Re. fuck
9th Sep 2017 2:14pm
giggles thank you beautiful one this was inspired by a dream of not being good enough because I was too fat & my own insecurities.. love you lady.. Brenda