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Tongue Swirls...

Let me make these tongue swirls come into your world,
the way I twirl will make you lose control,
hold my head and let your body unfold,
lose control,
tongue bacchanal deep in your caramel vaginal canal,
Give you that extreme to cream,
let me make you scream,
tongue kisses all in between,
aqua marine,
let me scuba dive,
please don't deprive,
baptize me in that prize pussy....

Written by Poeticzview

(AKingzCrown)

Published 4th Sep 2017

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Re. Tongue Swirls...

rhythmrhymebox

9th Sep 2017 00:26am

"tongue bacchanal deep in your caramel vaginal canal"
Wow. The mind boggles at the imagery and
I love those 4 "al/el" rhymes. All in one line. Good job.
Also like the quick switch to the scuba diving metaphor accomplished via "aqua marine"
Love the way it keeps the previous rhymes but throws in a new direction and rhyme.
"aqua marine,
let me scuba dive,
please don't deprive,
baptize me in that prize
pussy.... "
What do you think?