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Essence
The path of true love is akin to strolling down an old dirt road in the woods, sometimes finding clarity amongst the rustling leaves of tall tall trees, or stuck seeking the clarity in a muddied body of water, the existing polarities represent the journey, and each time the wind blows upon my face, I think of you in the depths of me.
I found strength in your admissions and visions, quietly reflecting in a place where your grace emerges, and you continue to streak my mind with the beauty of such luminous exquisite blends, where the realisation of passions devotion, have been triggered in a constant state of motion, and the heart and soul cannot be sold, yet delicately you provide a place for me to fit within a heart shaped mould, to enable the inner meshing of emotions to unfold.
Your essence is the elixir to my soul, as you hold my heart within the balance of your inner framework, yielding in the simplicity of your reciprocity, heart and soul you've anchored to yours, aligned upon a fickle spectrum that's unmasked & baring, and I honour your presence in absolute trust, yet somehow the ache emerges for something that's clearly a little hard to define, as tears fall silently in the quiet.
The markings of an ethereal love leaves me enchanted, whilst the absence of presence leaves me aching, to feel the rhythm & motion of an unspoken love, which enables one to soar, above and beyond, to a place in which I worship your very being in the bindings of oneness, until I feel you pulsating from within, strumming upon all my sensitivities, as we each seek to quench the thirst for one another.
I love you is softly whispered by a delicately fragile heart, from a place in which I will always adore your presence, just like the stars seemingly adore the velvet skies in which they nestle each and every evening, and the more I inhale your essence, the deeper you submerge yourself within the depths of me, as you consume me wholly, and colour my world with the sweetest of emotions that are a clear depiction of the inner peace, we shared.
https://youtu.be/fGvwOt6NiZ4
I found strength in your admissions and visions, quietly reflecting in a place where your grace emerges, and you continue to streak my mind with the beauty of such luminous exquisite blends, where the realisation of passions devotion, have been triggered in a constant state of motion, and the heart and soul cannot be sold, yet delicately you provide a place for me to fit within a heart shaped mould, to enable the inner meshing of emotions to unfold.
Your essence is the elixir to my soul, as you hold my heart within the balance of your inner framework, yielding in the simplicity of your reciprocity, heart and soul you've anchored to yours, aligned upon a fickle spectrum that's unmasked & baring, and I honour your presence in absolute trust, yet somehow the ache emerges for something that's clearly a little hard to define, as tears fall silently in the quiet.
The markings of an ethereal love leaves me enchanted, whilst the absence of presence leaves me aching, to feel the rhythm & motion of an unspoken love, which enables one to soar, above and beyond, to a place in which I worship your very being in the bindings of oneness, until I feel you pulsating from within, strumming upon all my sensitivities, as we each seek to quench the thirst for one another.
I love you is softly whispered by a delicately fragile heart, from a place in which I will always adore your presence, just like the stars seemingly adore the velvet skies in which they nestle each and every evening, and the more I inhale your essence, the deeper you submerge yourself within the depths of me, as you consume me wholly, and colour my world with the sweetest of emotions that are a clear depiction of the inner peace, we shared.
https://youtu.be/fGvwOt6NiZ4
Published 2nd Sep 2017
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2nd Sep 2017 2:04am
2nd Sep 2017 3:29am
Wonderfully composed. My mind does wonder if you are rejoicing in a present status or looking back on what has been just because of the changes in verb tense from past to present and so forth.
2nd Sep 2017 6:43am
2nd Sep 2017 9:16am
Can agree to the general idea of love life having moments of clarity in a love life where it is otherwise difficult to make sense of the direction.
I would call it romantic and warm, with hints of a more physical side to the relationship in the (intended or not) double-entendres. ("I think of you in the depths of me" could be interpreted as either referring to the depths of your heart/mind or, physically, in your body.)
I can visualise the 'dirt track' image, imagining a couple walking in a muddy country footpath.
Favourite phrase - "you continue to streak my mind" - could refer to how the memory of him blends in your mind, or visions of him running naked across the mind's eye.
I would call it romantic and warm, with hints of a more physical side to the relationship in the (intended or not) double-entendres. ("I think of you in the depths of me" could be interpreted as either referring to the depths of your heart/mind or, physically, in your body.)
I can visualise the 'dirt track' image, imagining a couple walking in a muddy country footpath.
Favourite phrase - "you continue to streak my mind" - could refer to how the memory of him blends in your mind, or visions of him running naked across the mind's eye.
2nd Sep 2017 9:38am
flowed like good wine...in depth flavor...I could inhale the essence...still a little lit...-J
3rd Sep 2017 3:45pm
