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CALL AND RESPONSE BETWEEN FATHER AND CHILD

I used to say to my  boy
when I carried him,
what now, its been about 9 a year ago now...
 
Im going to eat you.  
Im going to bite you.  
Im going to tickle your toes.  
nibble your nose.  
 
Then I started saying to my little daughter,  
After a while, she started saying,
 
 'Not Again! '  
 
 
CALL: I'm going to EAT you.  
 
RESPONSE: Not Again!  
 
CALL: I'm going to BITE you  
 
RESPONSE: Not Again!  
 
CALL I'm going to TICKLE your TOES  
 
RESPONSE: Not Again!  
 
CALL: Nibble your Nose  
 
     Not Againe!!!!
Written by rabbitquest
Published | Edited 5th Sep 2017
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