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Silence
At a secluded yellow forest
a tenor in the redwood concert
Silence sings the highest notes
make needle-like leaves of the giant move
the scarcely loud voice
you wouldn’t hear on earth
Its vast entity's as vivacious as tai chi
vibrates the midsummer’s trance
during slight dalliance
I found out the very crucial triviality
seems as diminutive as empty
Hello Silence
my beloved friend
nice to hear you, feel you
even though I can’t see you
love the moment
having a conversation with you
I am following the trace of your pace
walking on the solitary winding path
where the thorny leaves fully pave
to taste the every bite of bitter sweetness
to find out the hidden secret of life
Oh Silence
As negligible as a tiny seed
I often look up to your glorious face
bathing in your arms is just I need
would you let me melt into your grace?
Hey Silence
the reality is grievous
since the lofty redwood
has been a lot blasted these days
the historical vicissitudes and fatal variables
have made it hard to revive his past glories
I used to pass meadows
to admire his magnificence
but right now I have only discovered
he has gone through the mill
even though I'm in awe
of his towering height still
His unusual quietness
just as stifling as death
Walking on the lonely path
where September sunbeam
made dappled patterns
through the spiky leaves
along with my skeptical faith
I can’t help but wonder
is it the road I want to take?
Where is the end I could possibly stop?
once I dreamed of being
as strong as the redwood
but right now I could only proclaim
I want to be as vivacious as you, Silence
Loud voice with such few words
a tenor in the redwood concert
Silence sings the highest notes
make needle-like leaves of the giant move
the scarcely loud voice
you wouldn’t hear on earth
Its vast entity's as vivacious as tai chi
vibrates the midsummer’s trance
during slight dalliance
I found out the very crucial triviality
seems as diminutive as empty
Hello Silence
my beloved friend
nice to hear you, feel you
even though I can’t see you
love the moment
having a conversation with you
I am following the trace of your pace
walking on the solitary winding path
where the thorny leaves fully pave
to taste the every bite of bitter sweetness
to find out the hidden secret of life
Oh Silence
As negligible as a tiny seed
I often look up to your glorious face
bathing in your arms is just I need
would you let me melt into your grace?
Hey Silence
the reality is grievous
since the lofty redwood
has been a lot blasted these days
the historical vicissitudes and fatal variables
have made it hard to revive his past glories
I used to pass meadows
to admire his magnificence
but right now I have only discovered
he has gone through the mill
even though I'm in awe
of his towering height still
His unusual quietness
just as stifling as death
Walking on the lonely path
where September sunbeam
made dappled patterns
through the spiky leaves
along with my skeptical faith
I can’t help but wonder
is it the road I want to take?
Where is the end I could possibly stop?
once I dreamed of being
as strong as the redwood
but right now I could only proclaim
I want to be as vivacious as you, Silence
Loud voice with such few words
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Re: Re. Silence
31st Aug 2017 5:33pm
Dear Again, thank you for the nice comment and the wonderful suggestion. and appreciate the RL add. I know what you mean. I will follow your suggestion...... With love, RoseJasmine
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31st Aug 2017 9:22pm
kindness friend you are a good poet stick to the decent side of this site avoid reading all trash we write just be polite
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1st Sep 2017 1:27am
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1st Sep 2017 6:57pm
Sure Again, no problem! it's my pleasure. Thank you for loving my poem. I am so so happy! Love, RoseJasmine
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Anonymous
2nd Sep 2017 1:15am
Hey Rose.........luv this......very vivid in image........felt as if I took a stroll thru the forest thru your words........enjoyed very much........purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. Silence
2nd Sep 2017 1:39am
Hey Flowergirl, thank you for the always support. So grateful I have you a speial angel to read my poem. Love, RoseJasmine
Re: Re. Silence
2nd Sep 2017 3:02am
Again, thank you again and again.....I will try to fix it to meet your expectation. Love, RJ
Re. Silence
2nd Sep 2017 5:09am
wonderfully written..captivating read..that pulls you along the page...I almost heard the silence from your descriptions...nice digital ink-J
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2nd Sep 2017 5:27am
Hey J, nice to meet you here. Thank you so much for reading my poem and leaving such a nice comment. I love the word "captivating", and glad you think so! Really appreciate having your support. RoseJasmine
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3rd Sep 2017 2:24am
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4th Sep 2017 4:03pm
It is September and your poem are so wonderful .
A lonely couple walking in the rain under umbrella
And each drop of rain make He and She
Feel the sense of love in the rain.
Lovely and thank you Rose
A lonely couple walking in the rain under umbrella
And each drop of rain make He and She
Feel the sense of love in the rain.
Lovely and thank you Rose
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4th Sep 2017 4:51pm
Hey Andi, thank you for the read and the nice comment. Your support means a lot to me. And I like your peom too. Thank you for sharing! RoseJasmine
Re. Silence
5th Sep 2017 6:33am
The brilliance of this write is the bond between human life and the rest of nature. The vivid and tender link makes this relatable to any reader! Terrific!
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5th Sep 2017 7:17am
Hey Jazz, such a great comment from you makes me feel so happy. Your words make my heart bloom like a summer flower.....so grateful to have you to read my poem, and thank for the RL add. Love, RoseJasmine
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7th Sep 2017 1:07am
ur lucky jazz has strode this page
HE HAS BLOCKED me
I wonder why
You may ask him to follow this design
He may incline
and I see so many have read thee
minus the deleted ones by me
Keep it up Rosy
you will be like
purply
soonly
HE HAS BLOCKED me
I wonder why
You may ask him to follow this design
He may incline
and I see so many have read thee
minus the deleted ones by me
Keep it up Rosy
you will be like
purply
soonly
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Re: Re. Silence
7th Sep 2017 1:45am
Dear Again, you have made my heart bloom many times lol, I should let you know earlier. Love, so much, RoseJasmine
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11th Sep 2017 3:18pm
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Hey Destiny, sorry for being late to reply.
Taichi is a philosophical thought from Laozi’s Taoism which is widely accepted by Chinese people. Tai(太) means very big, chi(極) means the highest point of the highest mountain, so taichi means no limitation or beyond limitation.
The basic concept of taichi is to pursue a life which is full and harmonious with a balance of yin and yang (feminine and masculine). It is believed that life is a circle, the place where you start and then you will go to the same point. This idea can be connected to birth and death because they are all about the same point--emptiness which can be explained to be zero or fulfillment. So complicated right? if you don't get it, you are not alone. No worries lol.....
To get a full and harmonious life, people practice taichi chuan to reconcile the yin and yang of their bodies. Hope I could show you the taichi’s logo here, therefore you would capture the idea easily…. Hopefully I have explained enough for you...... Sincerely, RoseJasmine
Taichi is a philosophical thought from Laozi’s Taoism which is widely accepted by Chinese people. Tai(太) means very big, chi(極) means the highest point of the highest mountain, so taichi means no limitation or beyond limitation.
The basic concept of taichi is to pursue a life which is full and harmonious with a balance of yin and yang (feminine and masculine). It is believed that life is a circle, the place where you start and then you will go to the same point. This idea can be connected to birth and death because they are all about the same point--emptiness which can be explained to be zero or fulfillment. So complicated right? if you don't get it, you are not alone. No worries lol.....
To get a full and harmonious life, people practice taichi chuan to reconcile the yin and yang of their bodies. Hope I could show you the taichi’s logo here, therefore you would capture the idea easily…. Hopefully I have explained enough for you...... Sincerely, RoseJasmine
Re. Silence
13th Sep 2017 1:41pm
Somehow I missed this...but I'm happy I got to read it...it's as magnificent in depth as is those trees in height...excellent work Rose!... :)
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Re: Re. Silence
13th Sep 2017 2:44pm
Hi, my dearest friend, been missing your comment a lot. Thank you for the nice critique. I always need your support you know. Glad you like it! Love, RoseJasmine