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Metrical Synthesis
Intrigued by the roots extending
Reaching out for the foundation of existence
Proclamations of all that is loudly silent
How beautiful of a scene
To be inside the mind
View all it has seen
Cravings from arousing reads
Invading my space like sunflower weeds
Breathtaking and serene..
Bright, full and lustrously clean,
The kind you want to smother you
So you can inhale the scent of calm..
Dance in the upright palm
Extending out a platform of ironic stability
Gentle in manner,
Iconic in nature
The mystery of maturity
Comes to a succulent center
Growing fond of poetic bonds
How wet the mind gets when it takes a daring step
Ventured off to find adventure
Instead we tripped up and caught nurture
Reflecting energies of our spirit
Magnetic in its chemistry
Drawn like a dependency
Needed like frequencies
Morphing obscenities
Into breathless scenery
Serenity....
Tip toeing through my hidden vexes
Whispering to my third eye
"Let me see what's next"
And so she wrote.......
Published 26th Aug 2017
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Anonymous
26th Aug 2017 6:54pm
My lovely word weaver, if you ever publish, please tell me ASAP. I will be the first in line, eager to drown in the intricacies of your mind and muse. Gorgeous!
27th Aug 2017 00:20am
My dear ash...you always inspire me. My gratitude for that is magnanimous. I make a promise this day that if I ever take the step to publish...I will send you a copy personally...a muse such as yourself would never have to stand in line ❤️ Thank you so much.
Anonymous
26th Aug 2017 10:35pm
My Lyrical Miss...well damn guuuurrrl....you wielded these words together seamlessly and each one spoke loudly! You do it to me always...leaving me to wish I had written it...so talented...you infect us with the ability to feel every word...
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
27th Aug 2017 00:22am
My kindred poetess...im always so bashful when you uplift me. The amazement you feel is reciprocated in me each time I read your words...always wishing I could connect like you do. It is an honor I can make you feel the same. Thank you as always my lyrical sister!
27th Aug 2017 1:30am
Beautifully written piece, it flows so perfectly it and smoothly with not snags, it's like silk. It brings about a lot of emotions as well. Simply lovely.
~anonshadow
~anonshadow
28th Aug 2017 2:27pm
Thank you for your kind words Ps...i appreciate you reason and giving with my silky flow.
27th Aug 2017 12:49pm
I'm so in love with the flow n lyrical rhythm of this my dear!! Can't even imagine how I'd make it without your poetic 'food' nourishing me... :)
28th Aug 2017 2:28pm
Aaaah PM...you have me blushing. Don't you worry! I've got a mental fridge full of never ending food waiting to be spilled upon a page. I'd never let you starve. :-)
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Anonymous
21st Sep 2017 1:01pm
I would love to give you good critique on this one.....but...i'm sorry i'm too busy gushing right now.....freakin hell this is beautifully written, your word choice and meter are spot on and you filled my screen with amazing imagery......total fan boy alert lol
Epic....holy crap.
Ben xx
Epic....holy crap.
Ben xx
21st Sep 2017 2:18pm
Thank you luv...I'm honored by your energy and gushing...for that in itself is critique of its own....I appreciate the positive vibes and uplifting...and I welcome you fan boy with open arms and lyrics 😊 I'm just cheesing with flattery over here.
