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DREAMSCAPE : OCCAM'S RAZOR
Saw the signs
The position justified
Remove the hindrance
Signalled
The space between stars
In half-light
And the receding consciousness
Prelude
Weaving the clouds
Above my head
Counting the marks
That separate my years
Like the marrow of a tree
Find me when it dies
Mouth white noise echoes
Over the edifying shore
That last saw my sorrow
Residual
The after-image
Of the pendulum swing
Oscillating before me
I reach for the center
Center in me
Embracing the edges
That divide me
Published 24th Aug 2017
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25th Aug 2017 1:27am
25th Aug 2017 4:24am
profound... each time I read it, I pick up new visuals and new meanings... like a Rorschach blot of words!
27th Aug 2017 4:47pm
Witty Write UV!!!
I was just cranking a Clutch tune with that reference a little while ago (Occams's Razor)
Always dug that term.
The delivery style You chose was very fitting-streamlined simplicity to deeper questions
I was just cranking a Clutch tune with that reference a little while ago (Occams's Razor)
Always dug that term.
The delivery style You chose was very fitting-streamlined simplicity to deeper questions
