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it's like I'm.. inst by Idealism
it's like I'm..
floating through time
across electric lines
power subsidies
blurring my divine nature
i find myself a stranger
hurry or see me later
hurting to meet maker
take me at my face
as I move this weight like a freighter
serving plates like a waiter
forever fake ...Nah
can't afford to wait
do i need a translator?
if fortune favors the bold
what I owe
only I know
I just hope it shows..
let it go
let em know
let me flow
I just hope it shows..
let it go
let em know
let me flow
I just hope it shows
<3
♫ instrumental by Idealism ♫
➥https://soundcloud.com/idealismus
Image Crossroads Bar by Ryley Garcia
➥https://www.artstation.com/artwork/nqABE
floating through time
across electric lines
power subsidies
blurring my divine nature
i find myself a stranger
hurry or see me later
hurting to meet maker
take me at my face
as I move this weight like a freighter
serving plates like a waiter
forever fake ...Nah
can't afford to wait
do i need a translator?
if fortune favors the bold
what I owe
only I know
I just hope it shows..
let it go
let em know
let me flow
I just hope it shows..
let it go
let em know
let me flow
I just hope it shows
<3
♫ instrumental by Idealism ♫
➥https://soundcloud.com/idealismus
Image Crossroads Bar by Ryley Garcia
➥https://www.artstation.com/artwork/nqABE
Published 22nd Aug 2017
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9th Sep 2017 11:43am
Very good rhythm. One minor thing though, starting a minute into the song may cause people to leave before they get to the real meat of the piece. I skimmed through till I found you though, glad I did because it would have been a shame to have missed out on this.
9th Sep 2017 1:01pm
hey mate, thanks for that insight. you are very correct. most of the instrumentals I use don't take that long to get going, but this one certainly does. I am going to take a look at it again and see what I want to do. thanks again!
9th Sep 2017 2:09pm
Not a problem! I normally do a 10-20 second delay, but keep up the good work!
