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Stranger
He sneaks up
From behind
Doesn't speak English very well
Asking her if she'll be his friend,
("you be my friend, understand?")
Not having any idea what he meant by that
She said, "it's really hard to know ahead of time."
He said, "no?"
She said, "exactly!"
From behind
Doesn't speak English very well
Asking her if she'll be his friend,
("you be my friend, understand?")
Not having any idea what he meant by that
She said, "it's really hard to know ahead of time."
He said, "no?"
She said, "exactly!"
Published 17th Aug 2017
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Anonymous
17th Aug 2017 5:10pm
Oh, this one brought a grin to my face. You laid that scene out perfectly.
17th Aug 2017 6:25pm
ltm
the no? reminds me so much of when i'm overwhelmed & slip back into the habit
this gave me a chuckle jeje
xo
the no? reminds me so much of when i'm overwhelmed & slip back into the habit
this gave me a chuckle jeje
xo
17th Aug 2017 7:06pm
when you break it down, it's such a weird question, in those circumstances - the response was perfect and polite, not sure If I would have been polite (lol)
very clever write :-)
very clever write :-)
17th Aug 2017 9:28pm
Welll....in this case...a bit more to the cliche of "hind"-sight being 20/20. ;)
A very quick-witted and appropriate reply--to be certain!
Innovative Ink, my friend!
A very quick-witted and appropriate reply--to be certain!
Innovative Ink, my friend!
A wonderful read, two souls speaking the same language in totally different dialects. I feel as if they are ready to walk off hand in hand, no?
exactly!!
Thank you for the write.
exactly!!
Thank you for the write.
