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Rebirth: By the Sin of our Souls (A collaboration w/Poetikmind & SeaEntity1)
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I need a soul with thick soles
To walk ice lakes
Wade in mercury waves
And to tread sticky black pavement
Of my past mistakes
Past mistakes ...
they ghost me,
phantoms of my plight.
I find it treacherous
travelin' these depths
mired emotions betrayed
by an errant light
Eyes closed,chest open
Hands tied with my heart blindfolded
If vulnerability is a sin
Then do as I proclaim
Sculpt me from a dough
Of clay and gelatin
If only I could craft you into a vision,
time the minutes with deft precision
loose the restraint 'pon the heart
see it fall away, damaged part
as I tie you into this fevered soul
bind our destinies, a mirrored sole...
A crevice of liquid glass
Is a sea,where my eyes slouch
And vengeance steeps
In a cup of dreams
Creamy with capability
Garnished with conviction
And decadent dalliances
Are ever so replete
I convict, to your bein'
it's true essence I'm seein'
shower me as I reign supreme
within your ripened garden
swallow the mass, loaded
with future's intent, loss
with bliss fully spent.
I need a soul with thick soles
To walk ice lakes
Wade in mercury waves
And to tread sticky black pavement
Of my past mistakes
Past mistakes ...
they ghost me,
phantoms of my plight.
I find it treacherous
travelin' these depths
mired emotions betrayed
by an errant light
Eyes closed,chest open
Hands tied with my heart blindfolded
If vulnerability is a sin
Then do as I proclaim
Sculpt me from a dough
Of clay and gelatin
If only I could craft you into a vision,
time the minutes with deft precision
loose the restraint 'pon the heart
see it fall away, damaged part
as I tie you into this fevered soul
bind our destinies, a mirrored sole...
A crevice of liquid glass
Is a sea,where my eyes slouch
And vengeance steeps
In a cup of dreams
Creamy with capability
Garnished with conviction
And decadent dalliances
Are ever so replete
I convict, to your bein'
it's true essence I'm seein'
shower me as I reign supreme
within your ripened garden
swallow the mass, loaded
with future's intent, loss
with bliss fully spent.
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Re. Rebirth: By the Sin of our Souls (A collaboration w/Poetikmind &am
Anonymous
16th Aug 2017 7:29pm
Wow, what an amazing blend your two voices make. So different and yet so completely complimentary. Very beautiful
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Re: Re. Rebirth: By the Sin of our Souls (A collaboration w/Poetikmind
17th Aug 2017 1:48am
Ash, from both of us I thank you... Your support as always is greatly appreciated
Re: Re. Rebirth: By the Sin of our Souls (A collaboration w/Poetikmind
17th Aug 2017 4:13pm
We did it on a whim,and now here we are.Both of us were pleased with the outcome. ..ok i meant blown by,the outcome. Thanks Ash!
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Re. Rebirth: By the Sin of our Souls (A collaboration w/Poetikmind &am
16th Aug 2017 7:39pm
what a truly, gorgeous merging of talent.
beautiful imagery steeped in profundity...
... a bloody fine collab, one of the better ones i've read around here in ages
xo
beautiful imagery steeped in profundity...
... a bloody fine collab, one of the better ones i've read around here in ages
xo
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Re: Re. Rebirth: By the Sin of our Souls (A collaboration w/Poetikmind
17th Aug 2017 1:51am
Aaawww...mami you know I love that you liked this so much, the two of us truly thank you... :)
Re: Re. Rebirth: By the Sin of our Souls (A collaboration w/Poetikmind
17th Aug 2017 4:19pm
Re. Rebirth: By the Sin of our Souls (A collaboration w/Poetikmind &am
16th Aug 2017 7:50pm
My mind is awash with sheer delight. Writes such as this are truly few and far between.
Poetry supreme!
Great Job, both of you.
Poetry supreme!
Great Job, both of you.
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Re: Re. Rebirth: By the Sin of our Souls (A collaboration w/Poetikmind
17th Aug 2017 1:56am
You're very sweet to say that my dear, I'm flattered n I'm sure SE1 will be too... For the two of us I say a huge thanks n I'm deeply appreciative... :)?
Re. Rebirth: By the Sin of our Souls (A collaboration w/Poetikmind &am
16th Aug 2017 8:44pm
I love this piece. Your voices merge well together. A wonderful collaboration you guys did together (I hope you all do it again). Beautiful and well done.
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Re: Re. Rebirth: By the Sin of our Souls (A collaboration w/Poetikmind
17th Aug 2017 4:33am
Re. Rebirth: By the Sin of our Souls (A collaboration w/Poetikmind &am
Anonymous
17th Aug 2017 2:36am
This is one helluva collab...i am diggin the uniqueness of this seamless flow between you two..
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Re: Re. Rebirth: By the Sin of our Souls (A collaboration w/Poetikmind
17th Aug 2017 11:32am
Thank you bro. I'm glad you thought it unique, it's somethin one hopes for...to be unique... we thank you n appreciate you greatly... :)
Re. Rebirth: By the Sin of our Souls (A collaboration w/Poetikmind &am
17th Aug 2017 7:19am
yes ..harmonious blend of two voices...I agree...nice measure...pleasure to read..-J
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Re: Re. Rebirth: By the Sin of our Souls (A collaboration w/Poetikmind
17th Aug 2017 11:34am
Aaawww...yea, that's wonderful to hear! Thanks bunches from us both, it's truly appreciated. :)
Re. Rebirth: By the Sin of our Souls (A collaboration w/Poetikmind &am
Anonymous
17th Aug 2017 1:40pm
Hey Sea & Poet ~ BRAVO!!! How brilliant is this masterpiece crafted between you two........tipping my in respect and admiration for your blended talent writing as one......RL for me......purple luv & hugs to you both xo :)
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Re: Re. Rebirth: By the Sin of our Souls (A collaboration w/Poetikmind
17th Aug 2017 2:37pm
Thank you sweet flower, we are truly grateful n deeply appreciate your support :)
Re. Rebirth: By the Sin of our Souls (A collaboration w/Poetikmind &am
18th Aug 2017 3:53pm
This....was just absolutely epic....great collaboration. The flow was intense and in sync....love it.
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Re: Re. Rebirth: By the Sin of our Souls (A collaboration w/Poetikmind
18th Aug 2017 10:49pm
There she is! Great to hear from you again my sweet one...thank you for the beautiful comment...we truly appreciate it. :)
Re. Rebirth: By the Sin of our Souls (A collaboration w/Poetikmind &am
18th Aug 2017 4:53pm
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18th Aug 2017 10:51pm
Re. Rebirth: By the Sin of our Souls (A collaboration w/Poetikmind &am
Anonymous
3rd Sep 2017 9:47pm
you two had me singing opera and i dont even know how to sing lol
good gawd1 this was fantastically written!
good gawd1 this was fantastically written!
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Re: Re. Rebirth: By the Sin of our Souls (A collaboration w/Poetikmind
3rd Sep 2017 9:59pm
Wow opera!? Lol that's so funny, I've always took you for a country singer lol jk...I loved your comment sweetie, n I deeply appreciate you too, as I'm sure my collaborator would as well... thank you! :)
Re. Rebirth: By the Sin of our Souls (A collaboration w/Poetikmind &am
Beautiful collaboration ... I love it. Now this is what romantic poetry is all about.
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6th Sep 2017 10:52am
Re. Rebirth: By the Sin of our Souls (A collaboration w/Poetikmind &am
17th Nov 2017 5:10pm
'Creamy with capability
Garnished with conviction'. Wow a lovely combinations of a queen and a genuis. Great job up there!
Garnished with conviction'. Wow a lovely combinations of a queen and a genuis. Great job up there!
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17th Nov 2017 7:18pm