When I Remember To Remember

I always enjoy the essence of Your poetry, Mik. And the endings  solidly ground the piece in retrospection and contemplation. Your diction is unique and interesting as well.  

The ONLY thing I'd suggest is losing the commas at the end of your lines. There's already a natural pause, and the punctuation seems to hinder flow more so than allow it a seamless transition to the next line.

Thank you so much! :) Gotcha, I'll drop them. It's kind of annoying to write like that anyway haha!

The opening line catches very well
"This broke the grey". i like the way you play with light imagery in your poem (skipping light,Gold gladdens
Even exposure illuminates,tinted teeming things,brushed by bright beams).
well written AtoMikbomb

Light is an excellent means for metaphors :) Thank you!