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A Home in Your Heart
"Every wise woman
buildeth her house"
Sometimes circumstance
prevents expansion of self;
Freedom to perfect
our natural gifts:
A beautiful nude
accessorizing drawing paper;
the Poetic pen coated with Verse
So I build a Home in Your Heart
where You're Loved
supported for who You are;
encouraged to become
whatever You want
Where all the petals
of every Daisey plucked
from Our Sun-Dusted Garden
will only ever say,
'She Loves Me'
Because 'Not'
is nonexistent
In this House
~
buildeth her house"
Sometimes circumstance
prevents expansion of self;
Freedom to perfect
our natural gifts:
A beautiful nude
accessorizing drawing paper;
the Poetic pen coated with Verse
So I build a Home in Your Heart
where You're Loved
supported for who You are;
encouraged to become
whatever You want
Where all the petals
of every Daisey plucked
from Our Sun-Dusted Garden
will only ever say,
'She Loves Me'
Because 'Not'
is nonexistent
In this House
~
Written by
Ahavati
Published 14th Aug 2017
| Edited 15th Aug 2017
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Re. A Home in Your Heart
14th Aug 2017 11:57pm
Re: Re. A Home in Your Heart
15th Aug 2017 11:31am
Re. A Home in Your Heart
whenever I do it I always
think that the petals have been fixed
or else I've just got
a bad hand ..
think that the petals have been fixed
or else I've just got
a bad hand ..
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Re: Re. A Home in Your Heart
15th Aug 2017 11:32am
LOL! One of the things I Love about Daisies, Paul, is that I've never been given a bad hand! 🌼
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15th Aug 2017 00:15am
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15th Aug 2017 00:38am
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15th Aug 2017 1:16am
Re. A Home in Your Heart
15th Aug 2017 1:26am
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15th Aug 2017 11:43am
Re. A Home in Your Heart
Only an idiot of a fool would take for granted, squander and question such a whole-hearted dedicated Love.
💜
💜
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I don't know much in this world, but I can attest you're no idiot of a fool. 💜
Re. A Home in Your Heart
15th Aug 2017 4:51pm
such a beautiful write and a beautiful sentiment - your love is an example to use all :-)
I love this :-)
I love this :-)
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Re: Re. A Home in Your Heart
15th Aug 2017 6:40pm
Re. A Home in Your Heart
15th Aug 2017 7:26pm
you have always written beautiful poetry, but your work of late is sublime, vati... the emotions that seep between the lines... ugh, i feel like a dirty voyeur in a trench coat.
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Re: Re. A Home in Your Heart
16th Aug 2017 4:09pm
I've been trying to meditate over a response to this humbling comment, Koshka. I"m but a mere feather fallen from the God of Love. I drift aimlessly at times, rest contentedly in the sun when the wind isn't blowing me about; and f( l )ail miserably when it does.
You're no dirty voyeur in a trench coat; you're my mudpie sister in Life. And boy do we make doosies! ❤
You're no dirty voyeur in a trench coat; you're my mudpie sister in Life. And boy do we make doosies! ❤
Anonymous
- Edited 3rd Jun 2018 9:45pm
15th Aug 2017 7:58pm
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Re. A Home in Your Heart
21st Aug 2017 3:17pm
i felt there were a few too many capitalizations. my favorite lines are lines 15-19.
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Re: Re. A Home in Your Heart
22nd Aug 2017 2:05pm
Thank you for your honest critique. Personification can be tricky. I appreciate your feedback.
Re. A Home in Your Heart
Anonymous
22nd Aug 2017 1:46pm
so beautiful
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22nd Aug 2017 2:06pm
Re. A Home in Your Heart
Anonymous
22nd Aug 2017 4:46pm
thank you very much :)
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8th Jul 2019 1:46pm
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8th Jul 2019 2:13pm