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It's Magique !

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� � � �it � � � � � as if it was The[e]
� � � � � � � � � ART of Po'et'ry � � �?

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Written by dkzksaxxas_DanielX

(DadaDoggyDannyKozakSaxfn)

Published 7th Aug 2017

#dark #drugs #escape #hurt #shadows

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Re. It's Magique !

gazellemon (Bradley J)

- Edited 7th Aug 2017 3:47am

7th Aug 2017 3:45am

Yo yo yo! I can dig this cryptic ink. I am curious as to why you format your words in the way that you do.. It is certainly creative and perhaps adds some value, but at the same time i think it can be a bit confusing and is a bit distracting from the words themselves.

So, what inspires you to write in this format? (although this is critical question, please don't take it as me hating on you lol)

<3

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dkzksaxxas_DanielX (DadaDoggyDannyKozakSaxfn)

- Edited 8th Aug 2017 6:11pm

8th Aug 2017 6:09pm

well, it's like this, all of "my art"(music, photo,poetry) has to be as spontaneous & unedited as possible. Thus, the "free-form", and (mostly uncalculated) fuzzy logic of the content, as in what is referred to as "stream-of-consciousness/unconsciousness/disconciousness"...... Regardless of how 'concise' one tries to be, we all "make up" our "own meanings" in response to whatever someone else says, does, creates.......we're all juggling illusions of 'what is', while thinking we're perceiving "reality". A very vain mis-take of Our intelligent Human'ness leading to pandemic delusion & the vile manner of treating each other, all sentient beings, & Our mother Earth. but, i could be wrong.