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MAGICAL MOTORING
(Inspired by the "Elegy for a Lost Object" competition)
Oh mystical, melodious
Fine four fendered friend
To where have you flown?
High and low have I looked
Maybe under the bed?
Or perhaps the sofa?
Fearing suffocation among rubbish
Of some malodorous trash bin
Buried there by the creepy candy man
As if from heaven you came
One December morn descending
White articulated wings spread
Polished silver bonnet gleaming
Poised for adventure
A time when fantasy reigned
And dreaming my vocation
Hour after hour transported
Along seashores of imagination
Cradled between fingers propelled
Envious little brother trailing behind
Like a despotic Baron
Screaming “I vont dat cah”
Happy relief from adult-sized pain
Dearly do I miss you
Would trade anything,
Even my baseball cards
In shoe box packed
To see, to touch you again
If one day a bang bang I hear
Running will I come toot sweet
A bientôt, mais pas au revoir
My pretty chitty
Oh mystical, melodious
Fine four fendered friend
To where have you flown?
High and low have I looked
Maybe under the bed?
Or perhaps the sofa?
Fearing suffocation among rubbish
Of some malodorous trash bin
Buried there by the creepy candy man
As if from heaven you came
One December morn descending
White articulated wings spread
Polished silver bonnet gleaming
Poised for adventure
A time when fantasy reigned
And dreaming my vocation
Hour after hour transported
Along seashores of imagination
Cradled between fingers propelled
Envious little brother trailing behind
Like a despotic Baron
Screaming “I vont dat cah”
Happy relief from adult-sized pain
Dearly do I miss you
Would trade anything,
Even my baseball cards
In shoe box packed
To see, to touch you again
If one day a bang bang I hear
Running will I come toot sweet
A bientôt, mais pas au revoir
My pretty chitty
Published 4th Aug 2017
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Anonymous
4th Aug 2017 5:34pm
you are just too good at this poetry thing ;)
extremely creative..
extremely creative..
4th Aug 2017 5:46pm
Wow! I appreciate the praise. I do love writing poetry and I am glad to know that I'm on the right track. You are a talent to be reckoned with as well...sorry I haven't read your stuff in awhile...life intervenes. I promise to remedy the situation.
Anonymous
4th Aug 2017 6:09pm
it's all ok, i never ask for much in life and here i ask for nothing in return.. do what you will but just know youre appreciated.. im having a hard time keeping up as well..because life does continue.. had free time today, so im enjoying.. its rare lol
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