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Deep Thoughts on the Q Train
Beauty
Heat
Subterranean
This is my thought for the day
Riding the Q train downtown
Observing the woman across the way
Drinking from her fancy thermos
On this moist and humid day
The subway is beyond cool
The city is my urban wonder
Illicit thoughts clog my psyche
I wonder if I would get these thoughts in Omaha
Probably other thoughts
This place is my jungle
Spicy hot and always on the edge of something
Visceral comes to mind
Always
Heat
Subterranean
This is my thought for the day
Riding the Q train downtown
Observing the woman across the way
Drinking from her fancy thermos
On this moist and humid day
The subway is beyond cool
The city is my urban wonder
Illicit thoughts clog my psyche
I wonder if I would get these thoughts in Omaha
Probably other thoughts
This place is my jungle
Spicy hot and always on the edge of something
Visceral comes to mind
Always
Published 2nd Aug 2017
| Edited 12th May 2018
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Anonymous
2nd Aug 2017 9:09pm
I guarantee Omaha would bore you silly. Hot and humid they got, but not a lot else. More ramshackle than jungle.
2nd Aug 2017 9:11pm
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Anonymous
3rd Aug 2017 1:28am
Good stuff right here !
3rd Aug 2017 2:41am
3rd Aug 2017 5:41pm
even I find the subway a sexy place to be, people forced together in tight places, Hmmmm :-)
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