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In the Hall There's Somebody Bad
Huddled in the corner, lights out,
I shiver and shake, I'm half clad
I'm so scared I can't even shout,
In the hall there's somebody bad.
I'm scrunched in the corner, afraid,
Oh, I'm sure that I will go mad;
I feel like I have been betrayed,
In the hall there's somebody bad.
©March 13, 2017 / Jerry Pat Bolton
Published 2nd Aug 2017
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2nd Aug 2017 4:43pm
dearest Jerry this made chills
run up & down my spine..
haunting write..
love you my friend..
Brenda
run up & down my spine..
haunting write..
love you my friend..
Brenda
2nd Aug 2017 4:48pm
A hug goes out to you, Brenda, and many thanks as well. Just two more of these little ditties to go.
Anonymous
2nd Aug 2017 4:55pm
LMAO!!! I'm laughing cause as I was reading this scary ink the pic wasn't up yet.......when it popped up it sacred me........added to the effect of it that's for sure........purple luv & hugs xo :)
I feel your purple luv and hugs, my friend. I appreciate it greatly. Took a little break on Chapter 2, getting geared now to start the real writing. Lotsa hugs going out to you, flower.. You must have been fast on the draw in commenting on the poem, because I post the photos immediately after posting the poem. Laughing at how scared you were when it finally came up
Anonymous
3rd Aug 2017 00:29am
Jerry these hall writes, although making me tighten before I go in, are making me anxious only to keep reading more of them! 😊
Xoxo Taryn
Xoxo Taryn
3rd Aug 2017 9:25pm
Thanks, Taryn, I appreciate your thouhts. I have two more to post. I have had major computer problems, but am back online again. I'll be posting later. Thank you again.
