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It Becomes Me
rise up
cut the cord
meat dangling
from bone
storm
shelter
converted
death trap
blood pours
on tap
breathe in
breathe out
wretched
slabs
appease
delight
maggots
feast on
stomach
bile
tattooed ass
designer
pussy
wound tight
her petals
need
parting by
serpent cock
blood pours
on tap
breathe in
breathe out
days forged
with night
chaos
becomes me
absent
heart
killing
becomes me
cry out loud
sour notes
lusting
for hope
my brain
has rhythm
lonely temples
contort
another
victim
laid to rest
holy ground
not for god
or the devil
but simply
my amusement
blood pours
on tap
breathe in
breathe out
days forged
with night
chaos
becomes me
absent
heart
killing
becomes me
cut the cord
meat dangling
from bone
storm
shelter
converted
death trap
blood pours
on tap
breathe in
breathe out
wretched
slabs
appease
delight
maggots
feast on
stomach
bile
tattooed ass
designer
pussy
wound tight
her petals
need
parting by
serpent cock
blood pours
on tap
breathe in
breathe out
days forged
with night
chaos
becomes me
absent
heart
killing
becomes me
cry out loud
sour notes
lusting
for hope
my brain
has rhythm
lonely temples
contort
another
victim
laid to rest
holy ground
not for god
or the devil
but simply
my amusement
blood pours
on tap
breathe in
breathe out
days forged
with night
chaos
becomes me
absent
heart
killing
becomes me
Published 2nd Aug 2017
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Anonymous
2nd Aug 2017 5:37am
My brother, the darkness in this ironically radiates off the page with this one! As I read this, all I keep thinking about is how much My Beautiful Brenda is going to simply love this!!
Loved these lines!!
"tattooed ass
designer
pussy
wound tight
her petals
need
parting by
serpent cock"
~ oh good lawwwd, how I giggled and shimmied in my seat when I read this, lol
xoxo Taryn
Loved these lines!!
"tattooed ass
designer
pussy
wound tight
her petals
need
parting by
serpent cock"
~ oh good lawwwd, how I giggled and shimmied in my seat when I read this, lol
xoxo Taryn
2nd Aug 2017 6:04am
Lady Taryn.. your kind words give me warmth.. i don't always go this dark.. but every now and then it's healthy.. i really dug that verse as well.. one of my better ones.. love you sis.. Dave
2nd Aug 2017 6:20am
"tattooed ass
designer
pussy
wound tight
her petals
need
parting by
serpent cock"
I fucking love this part Dave
you killed this write!!!
love you my brother..
Brenda
designer
pussy
wound tight
her petals
need
parting by
serpent cock"
I fucking love this part Dave
you killed this write!!!
love you my brother..
Brenda
2nd Aug 2017 6:27am
Brenda.. so glad you dig it.. i really can't believe i wrote that verse.. i love it.. but it just came out of left field.. guess that's how the best writes happen.. i appreciate your kind words always.. love you, my sister.. Dave
9th Aug 2017 11:39pm
12th Aug 2017 3:26am
Jaded.. such a nice comment.. rarely do people wanna journey to a dark imaginary place.. appreciate your visit.. much respect.. Dave
