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sunrise
creating with onyx rage
charcoal pain
a little cigarette ash
for highlights
amidst all this chaos
there blooms a garden
i keep her well tended
she nourishes me
when all is said & done
this is where i lay my head
I've planted wildflowers here
free as i would like to be
they turn their faces
to the my ashen skies
still they see the sun
even when I'm sullen & moody
they reflect back to me
the beauty i would like to be
lift my heavy emotions
as they sway in the breeze
if i listen closely they sing to me
a song as old as time
they say this is your story
write in the sunrise today
run barefoot through the fields
wild as the wind
tomorrow is a whole new chapter
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
charcoal pain
a little cigarette ash
for highlights
amidst all this chaos
there blooms a garden
i keep her well tended
she nourishes me
when all is said & done
this is where i lay my head
I've planted wildflowers here
free as i would like to be
they turn their faces
to the my ashen skies
still they see the sun
even when I'm sullen & moody
they reflect back to me
the beauty i would like to be
lift my heavy emotions
as they sway in the breeze
if i listen closely they sing to me
a song as old as time
they say this is your story
write in the sunrise today
run barefoot through the fields
wild as the wind
tomorrow is a whole new chapter
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
Published 1st Aug 2017
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Anonymous
1st Aug 2017 1:48pm
I freaking love the contrasts in this !!
1st Aug 2017 10:16pm
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Anonymous
1st Aug 2017 2:27pm
I will run barefoot through those fields with you, my beautiful Dark Angel! Such gorgeous landscapes you've painted for us to wander through. I am utterly lost in your vista.
So much love for you...
So much love for you...
1st Aug 2017 10:17pm
thank you lovely one that sounds like a wonderful plan you brightened my day with your thoughts :) love Crim
1st Aug 2017 2:35pm
That last line is just the thing to highlight
this very cool and enjoyable read, Brenda.
Your words awakened my senses to the
beauty of the wondrous nature we take for
granted far too often.
this very cool and enjoyable read, Brenda.
Your words awakened my senses to the
beauty of the wondrous nature we take for
granted far too often.
1st Aug 2017 10:18pm
thank you dearest Jerry i'm happy this brought that good feeling :) love you my friend.. Brenda
1st Aug 2017 3:58pm
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1st Aug 2017 4:58pm
With every Ray a new canvas lies paint the full spectrum become Rembrandt my dearest to steal the twinkle of every hypnotic eye 🌹🌹😊
1st Aug 2017 10:19pm
thank you dearest Quiet One for such a beautifully uplifting comment :) love Crim
1st Aug 2017 5:06pm
beautiful poem about one of my passions too - I love flowers, the planting and growing - the whole process and then there's the appreciation of their beauty:-)
excellent ink :-) - I've missed you - hugs :-)
excellent ink :-) - I've missed you - hugs :-)
1st Aug 2017 10:20pm
thank you David yes there is much peace to be had among the flowers :) love & hugs Brenda
Anonymous
2nd Aug 2017 1:44am
My Beautiful Brenda, the flowers and sun will always shine their faces upon you highlighting all the gorgeousness you are! This write is stunning my love, just as you are!
i love you deeply!
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
i love you deeply!
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
2nd Aug 2017 6:03am
thank you my love yes we can always look to their beauty even when moody inside & they will lift us :) love you beautiful.. love Brenda
2nd Aug 2017 2:36am
2nd Aug 2017 6:03am
Anonymous
2nd Aug 2017 5:43am
Brenda.. always love your lighter side.. beautiful ink.. love you..
Dave
Dave
2nd Aug 2017 6:04am
I needed some brightness in my charcoal skies today Dave thank you for showing me love on this.. love you my brother.. love Brenda
Anonymous
4th Aug 2017 12:49pm
You and Taryn be choking my air away!
this is so freaking beautiful doll
i apologise, im having a cruel hard time
trying to keep up with my readings
horrible i know
this is so freaking beautiful doll
i apologise, im having a cruel hard time
trying to keep up with my readings
horrible i know
4th Aug 2017 12:53pm
aw thank you beautiful lady & please don't worry about reading times get tough.. sending you love & hugs on this difficult time dear one.. love Crim
Anonymous
6th Aug 2017 3:19pm
I don't know how I missed this......trying to catch up on my reading and so glad I came across this....freaking beautiful!
from one B to another ....Epic,
xo
from one B to another ....Epic,
xo
7th Aug 2017 2:29pm
