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Fem'
Sweet Smell
Across her neck
Embrace along her side
The moonshine vision
The princess glide...
The taste of her neck
Alabaster tone
The shape of her hips
The moon in stone...
A bringer of sight
Bound in secret intent
She makes love to the light
The darkness laments...
My lips on her thigh
The silk of butter
With taste of wine
The inner sanctum
The cherished room
The woman incarnate
The scarlet moon....
Across her neck
Embrace along her side
The moonshine vision
The princess glide...
The taste of her neck
Alabaster tone
The shape of her hips
The moon in stone...
A bringer of sight
Bound in secret intent
She makes love to the light
The darkness laments...
My lips on her thigh
The silk of butter
With taste of wine
The inner sanctum
The cherished room
The woman incarnate
The scarlet moon....
Published 30th Jul 2017
| Edited 6th May 2018
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30th Jul 2017 7:52am
30th Jul 2017 8:26am
30th Jul 2017 11:58am
31st Jul 2017 3:38am
30th Jul 2017 12:35pm
Enchanting read-
Well done, looking forward to reading more of your words
Well done, looking forward to reading more of your words
30th Jul 2017 7:27pm
This one seduces ... "the taste of her neck" - nibble my nape and I'm all yours. "alabaster tone" is wonderful. So is "the silk of butter" Beautiful. Welcome to DUP noble versifier.
31st Jul 2017 4:27am
Welcome to DU MT!! Gorgeous sensual ink........we are gifted to have such talent join our poetic family.........enjoyed very much......purple luv & hugs xo :)
5th Aug 2017 5:55pm
my lips on her thigh
the silk of butter
with taste of wine
only one erotic
enjoy with again he keeps cummming up
again and again
many have enjoyed again's poetically being lain
you may A L S O
cum again
urs is as soft
ere the hardon is on
then bang bang
the silk of butter
with taste of wine
only one erotic
enjoy with again he keeps cummming up
again and again
many have enjoyed again's poetically being lain
you may A L S O
cum again
urs is as soft
ere the hardon is on
then bang bang
5th Aug 2017 6:24pm
5th Sep 2017 4:23am
this piece seems to have a lot more lust/excitement than deeper romantic sentiment. i like these words, "a bringer of sight / bound in secret intent."
5th Sep 2017 4:35am
Gracious' for the read...the secret intent was a mixture of both...and to show there is little difference between...thank you for the critique-J
