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THE FIRST TIME...
From the first time I laid my eyes on you, I knew I had to know you. from the first time I kissed you, I knew I had to have you. from the first time I held you, I knew I was falling for you. from the first time I made love wit you, I knew I was in love with you. from the first year I spent with you, I knew I wanted to spend my life with you...
Published 29th Jul 2017
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31st Jul 2017 4:34am
i hope the first time is still happening for you it is a nice place to be that's foe sure :)
1st Aug 2017 2:30am
yes it is! he is everything I could ever ask for and I just knew he was the one and I have known him 10years we been together 41/2years and going strong! GOD sent him to me and I knew it so I wrote about it. thank you for your feedback.
5th Aug 2017 12:26pm
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